Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more grammatically correct, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms (e.g., "I love taking"), article use, and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets since the colours change quickly and each one looks unique.

Sugestão: Provide a clear direct response first, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g., "I prefer rural areas"; "connected to nature"). Avoid vague phrases and repetition.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are more peaceful and closely connected to nature. For instance, the fresh air, open fields and natural sounds make rural landscapes much more relaxing than busy city scenes.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly, using correct tense and simpler phrasing. Give one specific reason and an example. Use linking words like "because" and "for example." Avoid fillers like "uh."

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam has many beautiful landscapes I want to explore first. For example, I hope to visit Ha Long Bay and the terraced fields in Sapa before travelling abroad.

× Yes, I love to taking pictures from different views because it helped me remember about the moment and the view at the time I saw that.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures from different views because they help me remember the moment and the scene when I saw it.

The phrase 'love to taking' mixes the infinitive 'to' with a gerund; after 'love' use either the gerund ('love taking') or the infinitive without 'to' structure ('love to take'). 'Helped' is past tense but the sentence describes a general habit, so use present tense 'help'. 'About the moment' is redundant; use 'the moment'. 'The view at the time I saw that' is awkward; use 'the scene when I saw it'. Also match plurality: 'pictures' -> 'they help'. Suggestion: use 'I love taking pictures' and keep verbs consistent in present tense for habitual actions.

× Especially I really love taking the picture about the sunset.

✓ Especially, I really love taking pictures of the sunset.

Use 'taking pictures of' not 'taking the picture about'. 'Picture' should be plural if referring to the activity generally. 'About the sunset' is incorrect preposition use; use 'of the sunset'. Add a comma after 'Especially' for clarity.

× I refer the views in rural areas because I think the weather in the environment also the views in connect with the natures more more than the urban areas recently in my.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I think the weather and the scenery are more connected with nature than in urban areas.

The student used 'refer' instead of 'prefer' (wrong verb choice). 'Weather in the environment' is redundant; use 'weather and the scenery'. 'The views in connect with the natures' is ungrammatical; use 'are more connected with nature'. Remove duplicate 'more' and incorrect adverbs like 'recently in my' which is unclear. Use comparative structure 'more ... than in urban areas'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'weather and scenery are'. Suggestion: simplify to 'I prefer views in rural areas because the weather and scenery are more connected with nature than in urban areas.'

× At that time I reviewed views in my countries because Vietnam had a lot of view I would like to discovery first before I, uh, view in the other countries.

✓ At that time I reviewed views in my country because Vietnam has a lot of places I would like to discover first before visiting other countries.

'Countries' should be singular 'country' when referring to the student's own country. 'Had' implies past; this is a general truth so use present 'has'. 'A lot of view' is incorrect count and form; use 'a lot of places' or 'many sights'. 'I would like to discovery' is wrong form; use the verb 'discover'. 'Before I, uh, view in the other countries' is ungrammatical; use 'before visiting other countries'. Also use consistent verb forms and remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use 'Vietnam has many places I would like to discover first before visiting other countries.'