Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., avoid repeated words and use plural/singular correctly) and use varied vocabulary (e.g., 'landscapes' instead of 'sceneries').

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. I particularly enjoy photographing sunsets and landscapes because the light and colors change so beautifully. For example, I often take photos to keep memories of places I visit, especially when the scenery looks especially stunning.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference in one sentence, then support with specific details using linking words. Reduce repetition and use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'greenery' not 'greeneries'). Mention a brief contrast to show balance.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because they offer peaceful scenery, abundant flowers, and lots of greenery. However, I also appreciate urban views for their interesting architecture and vibrant street scenes, which provide a different kind of beauty.

Sugestão: Open with a clear direct answer, then give two specific examples to explain why. Avoid fillers like 'uh' and correct minor grammar ('the views in my country'). Be more specific about what you like (e.g., beaches, mountain ranges) and finish the thought without trailing off.

Exemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because it offers diverse landscapes such as beautiful beaches, high mountains, and lush forests. For instance, I enjoy visiting the coastal areas at sunrise and hiking in the mountains for panoramic views that I can't always see on TV.

× I like taking pictures of everything, especially like sunsets and sceneries.

✓ I like taking pictures of everything, especially sunsets and scenery.

The phrase 'especially like sunsets and sceneries' is redundant and 'sceneries' is uncountable in this context; use 'scenery' as a non-count noun. Also remove the extra 'like' after 'especially' to make the sentence natural. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× It I I want to take it.

✓ I want to take them.

The original contains repeated words and unclear references. 'It I I' is a repetition and 'it' is ambiguous; since the speaker refers to 'pictures', use the plural pronoun 'them'. This fixes sentence structure and reference clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I want to take them for memories, for keeping memories when they are beautiful.

✓ I want to take them to keep memories when they are beautiful.

Use the infinitive 'to keep' instead of 'for keeping' to express purpose more naturally. 'For memories' is awkward; 'to keep memories' is the correct collocation. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I prefer rural areas because of the great scenery and the the flowers and the greeneries, but also urban areas may be pretty cool because of the architecture and yes.

✓ I prefer rural areas because of the great scenery, the flowers and the greenery, but urban areas can also be pretty cool because of the architecture.

Remove the duplicated 'the the' and change 'greeneries' to 'greenery' (uncountable). 'May be' is acceptable but 'can also be' is more natural here; remove the trailing 'and yes' for clarity and formality. Correct article use and noun form. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Each country has its own special views but I really enjoy my the views in my country.

✓ Each country has its own special views, but I really enjoy the views in my country.

'My the views' incorrectly combines possessive and definite article. Use 'the views in my country' or 'my country's views'. Also add a comma before 'but' for proper sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× It has seas, mountains, greeneries and uh I see some other views on TV like.

✓ My country has seas, mountains and greenery, and I also see other views on TV.

Start with 'My country' to clarify the subject instead of vague 'It'. Change 'greeneries' to 'greenery'. Move 'also' to a natural position and remove the trailing 'like'. This corrects pronoun reference and awkward phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 12