Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct minor grammar (plural/singular, articles), and add one brief specific reason or example. Keep answer within 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me preserve memories. For example, I often take photos of sunsets and city skylines so I can remember how a place looked and felt.

Sugestão: Make the answer more organized and grammatical. Begin with a direct statement of preference, then give two specific, linked reasons using linking words (for example, because, and). Avoid vague phrases and unfinished thoughts. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because cities offer varied facilities and interesting architecture. For example, urban parks, modern schools and lively streets give me more to photograph than the quieter rural landscapes.

Sugestão: Remove filler words and organize your reply: state your preference, then give a clear, specific example with concise details. Correct word order and use linking words like because and for example. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I’m familiar with the best places and facilities. For example, in Brampton there is a large park with a playground and cricket ground where families can walk and spend quality time.

× Yes, I like taking picture of the different views because I think taking picture is a good way to remember something.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I think taking pictures are a good way to remember things.

Multiple issues: 1) Singular and plural issue (ID 1) — 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'different views'. 2) Article errors (ID 22) — 'the different views' is unnatural here; use 'different views' without 'the'. 3) Quantifier/number agreement (ID 14) and general noun consistency — second 'taking picture' should be 'taking pictures'. 4) Word choice/number for 'something' — use plural 'things' to match general idea. Suggestion: use plural nouns consistently when referring to multiple items and omit 'the' when speaking generally.

× I prefer urban areas because in the urban areas people have a lot of facilities like a lot of parks, good schools and a good city view instead of rural areas as well as in the urban areas we can see a good view like big parks, swings and.

✓ I prefer urban areas because people there have many facilities, such as parks, good schools, and nice city views, unlike rural areas; in urban areas we can also see large parks and playgrounds.

Singular and plural issue (ID 1) — 'a lot of parks' and 'a good city view' are awkward; use 'many facilities' and plural 'city views'. Also fix omitted noun after 'swings' by using 'playgrounds'. Additionally, article errors (ID 22) — remove repeated 'the' before 'urban areas' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use 'many' for countable plural nouns and ensure parallel lists use consistent plural forms.

× Uh, obviously I prefer views in my country because in my country I know where is the park, where is the good facilities for an example, uh, I live in Brampton.

✓ Obviously I prefer views in my country because I know where the parks and good facilities are; for example, I live in Brampton.

Present tense / sentence structure issue (ID 6 and 26) — incorrect word order 'where is the park' should be 'where the park is' or 'where the parks are' in a statement. Also article and plural issues: 'the good facilities' should be 'good facilities' and 'for an example' should be 'for example'. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb order for statements (subject before verb) and use 'for example' as a fixed phrase.

× I know one park where is, where is a lot of there is a big playground where people can play cricket and walk and spend their quality of time.

✓ I know one park where there is a large playground; people can play cricket, walk, and spend quality time there.

Singular and plural issue (ID 1) and sentence structure errors (ID 26) — awkward repetition 'where is, where is a lot of there is' is ungrammatical. 'Big playground' is acceptable but 'large playground' is more natural; 'spend their quality of time' is incorrect — use 'spend quality time'. Also ensure the clause 'where there is' uses correct word order. Suggestion: remove repetitions, use 'where there is' for location clauses, and use the idiom 'spend quality time'.