Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Melhore a fluência reduzindo repetições e preenchimentos (por exemplo, eliminar "uh" e repetições como "I, I"). Use uma estrutura direta: uma frase-tópico clara seguida de 1–2 detalhes específicos. Corrija pequenos erros gramaticais (por exemplo, "you spend many time" → "you spend a lot of time", "instead of enjoy" → "instead of enjoying"). Mantenha o comprimento em até cinco frases e use pelo menos uma palavra de ligação para maior coerência (por exemplo, "because" ou "so").

Exemplo: Frankly, I'm not really into photography because I feel you spend a lot of time looking for the best angle and lighting instead of enjoying the moment. For example, when I travel I prefer to soak in the atmosphere rather than set up shots. So I usually take only a couple of quick photos and then put the camera away.

Sugestão: Torne a resposta mais concisa e organizada: comece com uma frase-tópico clara, depois dê 1–2 razões específicas e termine com um exemplo pessoal. Evite preenchimentos ("uh", "like") e repetições ("rural, rural"). Use ligação lógica (por exemplo, "because", "for example"). Corrija pequenas concordâncias ("everything that natural" → "everything natural").

Exemplo: I definitely prefer rural views because they are peaceful and relaxing, with fresh air and open spaces. For example, growing up in a big city made me appreciate mountains, rivers and waterfalls even more. These natural places help me unwind and feel refreshed.

Sugestão: Evite hesitações e repetições; formule uma frase-tópico direta e explique brevemente por que prefere vistas de outros países. Corrija a gramática em frases como "my biggest dream is uh, go to Switzerland" → "my biggest dream is to go to Switzerland" e evite adjetivos redundantes ("small tiny and cozy" → "small, cozy"). Use uma razão específica para sustentar a preferência e mantenha até cinco frases.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing landscapes and cultures different from my own. For example, my biggest dream is to go to Switzerland to see the Alps and stay in small, cozy mountain villages. I think those scenes would be uniquely beautiful and very peaceful.

× To be honest, I'm not into photography. Uh, because I, I think you spend many time trying to find the best angle or the best pose, the best light, instead of enjoy the moment.

✓ To be honest, I'm not into photography. Uh, because I think you spend a lot of time trying to find the best angle or the best pose, the best light, instead of enjoying the moment.

Use 'a lot of time' instead of 'many time' because 'time' is an uncountable noun; use the gerund 'enjoying' after a preposition or verb pattern 'instead of'. Also remove the extra filler 'I,' for clarity. Suggestions: replace 'many time' with 'a lot of time' or 'much time' and use 'enjoying' after 'instead of'.

× Oh, this is a easy question.

✓ Oh, this is an easy question.

Use the indefinite article 'an' before a word beginning with a vowel sound ('easy'). The rule depends on sound, not spelling. Suggestion: use 'an' before vowel sounds.

× Definitely, uh, rural, rural areas, because like they are so peaceful, they are so relaxing.

✓ Definitely, uh, rural areas, because they are so peaceful and so relaxing.

Remove redundant words and ensure subject 'they' correctly matches plural 'rural areas'. Also use conjunction 'and' for smooth coordination. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use 'and' to join similar adjectives.

× The fresh air, it's amazing.

✓ The fresh air is amazing.

Avoid unnecessary comma and pronoun repetition. 'The fresh air is amazing' is a complete sentence; using 'it's' after a comma is redundant. Suggestion: combine into a single concise sentence.

× I was raised in a big city, so the mountains, the river, the waterfall, the animals, like everything that natural, uh, amazed me.

✓ I was raised in a big city, so the mountains, the river, the waterfall, the animals—everything natural—amazed me.

Use 'everything natural' (adjective after noun is acceptable in this reduced relative clause) or 'everything that is natural'. Also use em dashes or commas for clarity. 'Amazed me' is past tense and matches 'I was raised'. Suggestion: say 'everything that is natural amazed me' or 'everything natural amazed me' for grammatical clarity.

× Well, as I am a rural person, I would say that I prefer views in other countries. Umm, my biggest dream is uh, go to Switzerland and so like the, the mountains and that small tiny and cozy houses.

✓ Well, as I am a rural person, I would say that I prefer views in other countries. Umm, my biggest dream is to go to Switzerland and see the mountains and those small, tiny, cozy houses.

After 'my dream is' use the infinitive 'to go'. Use 'see' to express experiencing views. Use 'those' for plural distant items and place adjectives in natural order: 'small, tiny, cozy' (avoid redundant adjectives). Also remove duplicate 'the'. Suggestion: use 'my dream is to go' and follow with appropriate verb 'see' and correct demonstrative 'those'.