Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases and grammatical mistakes (e.g., 'roads are broken,' 'there is pollution,' 'no discipline'). Use varied vocabulary and correct sentence structures to sound more natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph cityscapes and landscapes because they show different atmospheres: in my country many roads are poorly maintained and there is visible pollution, which creates a gritty, village-like feel; in contrast, well-kept areas look more attractive. Therefore I like capturing these contrasts to tell a story.

Sugestão: If you don't understand a word, ask a brief clarification, then answer the question succinctly. After clarification, state your preference with a reason and one example. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and avoid repeating the examiner's words. Practice key vocabulary: urban, rural, countryside, city, village.

Exemplo: Could you please explain 'rural areas'? (If clarification given) I prefer urban views because cities offer interesting architecture, varied street life and skyline views. For example, photographing old buildings and busy markets gives me more visual variety than quiet countryside scenes.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons and one concrete example. Correct grammatical errors (e.g., 'they are highly maintained and have better views and quality'; 'traffic circulation' or 'public transport'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas and avoid repetition ('I love there' repeated).

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because public spaces and roads are often better maintained and more picturesque. For example, when I visited Edinburgh, Scotland, the historic streets, well-preserved buildings and clean parks made for beautiful photos, unlike the poorly maintained streets in my hometown.

× I like taking pictures in different views because in my country there are normal cities, there are no view.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because in my country there are ordinary cities and not many views.

The original mixes singular and plural ('no view' vs 'there are'). Use consistent plural 'views' and clearer phrasing 'not many views' or 'few views'. Also 'in different views' is awkward; 'of different views' or 'of different places' is better. Suggest using plural agreement and natural collocations: 'pictures of different views' and 'not many views'.

× It is Rd. is so broken and so pollution and like, you know, no discipline, no rules.

✓ The roads are very broken, very polluted, and there is little discipline or enforcement of rules.

The sentence has incorrect word forms: 'pollution' (noun) should be 'polluted' (adjective) to describe roads; 'It is Rd. is' is ungrammatical and 'Rd.' abbreviated incorrectly. Use plural 'roads' and parallel adjectives 'very broken, very polluted'. Use 'there is little discipline' for uncountable concept. Suggest rephrasing to maintain parallel structure and correct adjective forms.

× So it looks like a village, but.

✓ So it looks like a village.

The original ends with a trailing conjunction 'but' and incomplete structure. Remove the conjunction to complete the sentence. Ensure sentences are complete thoughts.

× Sorry, can you explain what is rural areas, areas in urban areas?

✓ Sorry, can you explain what rural areas and urban areas are?

Word order is incorrect for the embedded question. Use 'what rural areas and urban areas are' or 'what rural areas are and what urban areas are'. Also remove the redundant word 'areas' repetition. Maintain correct subject-verb order in indirect questions.

× I definitely prefer views in different countries 'cause they are highly maintained and has a better views and quality.

✓ I definitely prefer views in other countries because they are well maintained and have better views and quality.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'they' requires 'have' not 'has'. 'Highly maintained' is awkward; use 'well maintained'. 'A better views' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'better views' without 'a'. Ensure pronoun agreement and correct collocations.

× Roads are highly maintained, everything through circulation I love there.

✓ Roads are well maintained, and traffic flows smoothly there, which I like.

'Highly maintained' is awkward; use 'well maintained'. The clause 'everything through circulation I love there' is ungrammatical; clarify meaning: 'traffic flows smoothly' or 'public services run well'. Reorder into a clear sentence with conjunction and relative clause.

× I also love Edinburgh, Scotland, the there are views so beautiful I love to go there.

✓ I also love Edinburgh, Scotland; the views there are so beautiful that I would love to go.

The original has extraneous article 'the' and run-on structure. Use proper punctuation and relative clause 'the views there are so beautiful that...' or 'Edinburgh has very beautiful views, and I would love to go.' Remove the extra 'there' and fix clause order for clarity.