Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix verb forms and avoid redundancy (e.g., say “take photos” not both “take a picture” and “taking a shot”).

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. For example, I often take frame-by-frame shots of sunsets to capture how the light and colours change, which helps me preserve the atmosphere and memorable moments.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first, then provide two specific reasons connected with linking words. Correct awkward phrases and avoid irrelevant details. For example, say you prefer urban views because of variety and accessibility, and briefly contrast with rural views.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I live in the city and there is a wide variety of interesting buildings and street scenes. Moreover, it is easier to find new photo spots nearby, whereas I have visited few rural towns so I don’t know their sights well.

Sugestão: Answer clearly and correct vocabulary and grammar. Start with a direct statement, then give specific examples and reasons. Avoid unclear names or typos (e.g., “Fuse”, “Jaffa Island”). Mention one or two distinctive features of your country’s views.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Indonesia has many diverse islands with unique scenery. For instance, each island offers different landscapes — beaches, volcanoes and traditional villages — which makes photography very rewarding.

× Yes, I love taking a picture with a different view, especially when I taking a shot frame by frame.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views, especially when I take a shot frame by frame.

The sentence contains incorrect verb forms and countable noun usage. 'Taking a picture' should be plural 'taking pictures' to match general preference. 'When I taking' is incorrect because after subject 'I' the base verb or appropriate tense is required; use 'I take'. Also 'of different views' is a more natural preposition. Improve by using correct subject-verb form and plural noun for general habits.

× I think it's so unique and beautiful to see how it capture the atmosphere and the memorable moment.

✓ I think it's so unique and beautiful to see how it captures the atmosphere and memorable moments.

Subject-verb agreement is wrong here: 'how it capture' should be 'how it captures' because singular subject 'it' needs 'captures'. 'The memorable moment' is awkward; plural 'memorable moments' is more natural when speaking generally. Also 'the' before 'memorable' is unnecessary for general statement.

× When it comes to urban or rural, I think I will pick urban because I live in the city and there are so many places to take a photo in the city and I've never been to in the side town of the country so never been there too.

✓ When choosing between urban and rural areas, I would pick urban because I live in the city and there are many places to take photos, and I have never been to small towns in the countryside.

The original sentence has run-on structure and awkward phrasing. 'When it comes to urban or rural' should be 'When choosing between urban and rural areas'. Use conditional 'would pick' for preference. Remove repetition 'in the city' and use plural 'photos'. 'I've never been to in the side town of the country' is ungrammatical; correct to 'I have never been to small towns in the countryside.' Break into clearer parts to fix sentence structure.

× I prefer Fuse in my own countries because Indonesia has a lot of places to take picture of, especially when it comes to in the island in Jaffa Island and every different island have their unique signature so it will be worth it.

✓ I prefer to travel in my own country because Indonesia has many places to take pictures, especially on islands like Java, and each island has its own unique character, so it is worth visiting.

Several issues: 'Prefer Fuse' is unclear — likely 'prefer to travel' or 'prefer being' and 'countries' should be singular 'country'. 'A lot of' is fine but 'places to take picture of' should be 'places to take pictures'. 'When it comes to in the island in Jaffa Island' is ungrammatical and likely intended 'on islands like Java' (Jaffa seems incorrect; replaced with Java as Indonesian island). 'Every different island have' has subject-verb agreement error; use 'each island has'. Clarify and simplify sentence, correct articles, plurality, and verb agreement.