Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Говорить более плавно и ясно: избегайте заполнителей («uh», «you») и поправьте слова («verages» → «various views»). Дайте чёткое вступительное предложение, затем одно-две конкретные детали (например, что именно привлекает: свет, цвет, композиция). Ограничьте ответ до 3–4 предложений, используйте связку («for example», «such as») корректно.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing various views, especially landscapes and sunsets by the lake. For example, I like capturing the warm light and reflections on the water because they create a peaceful, aesthetic composition.

Sugestão: Уточните предпочтение в начале и держитесь его: скажите прямо «I prefer urban/rural views». Избегайте противоречий в одном предложении. Дайте конкретные примеры того, что вы показываете в городских или сельских пейзажах и используйте связки («because», «for example») для логики. Уберите лишние заполнители и завершайте мысль.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because cities reveal everyday life and diverse characters. For example, street scenes with markets and commuters show real emotions and interactions, which I find more interesting to photograph.

Sugestão: Начните с чёткого ответа («I prefer») и объясните причину конкретно: укажите какие природные особенности или места (mountains, coast, historic towns). Избегайте субъективных громких утверждений («most beautiful in the world») без пояснения; лучше привести пример места. Держите ответ в 2–3 предложениях и используйте связки («because», «for example").

Exemplo: I prefer photographing views in my own country because it has diverse landscapes and well-preserved natural spots. For example, I often shoot coastal cliffs and mountain valleys that offer dramatic light and unique textures ideal for photography.

× As a photographer, I really like to take pictures of, uh, verages of you, such as, for example, uh, the starting place showing by showing some aesthetic or some sunsets in the lake. Yeah, you know, it's also kind of beauty.

✓ As a photographer, I really like to take pictures of different views, such as places that show aesthetic qualities or sunsets over lakes. They are quite beautiful.

The original sentence uses awkward and incorrect word choices ('verages of you', 'the starting place showing by showing', 'some aesthetic') and informal fillers ('uh'). Replace incorrect phrases with appropriate adjectives and nouns ('different views', 'places that show aesthetic qualities', 'sunsets over lakes') to make the sentence clear and grammatical. Remove filler words and simplify the final comment to a proper adjective ('beautiful'). Use parallel structure when listing examples.

× Umm, personal, I prefer the views in rural, in urban areas, uh, because in urban areas you can show the life of the people regardless of any, like, uh, type of people or whether they're rich or poor, you can show the beauty of life and the.

✓ Personally, I prefer views in urban areas because in cities you can show people's lives regardless of their background, whether they are rich or poor; you can show the beauty of life.

Problems: incorrect adverb 'personal' instead of 'personally'; wrong preposition and article usage ('in rural, in urban areas' is confused); awkward phrase 'the life of the people' should be 'people's lives'; 'regardless of any... type of people' is unidiomatic. Remove trailing fragment 'and the.' Use 'in urban areas' or 'in cities' consistently and use possessive form for clarity. Use punctuation to connect clauses.

× Umm personally I prefer to use in my own country because my country is uh, enough with beautiful nature and some resources for taking pictures. Uh, also, my country is indicated as the most beautiful country in the world so.

✓ Personally, I prefer to take pictures in my own country because it has beautiful natural scenery and plenty of resources for photography. Also, my country is often regarded as one of the most beautiful countries in the world.

Errors: 'prefer to use in my own country' misuses 'use' and prepositions — correct is 'prefer to take pictures in my own country'; 'enough with beautiful nature' is ungrammatical; use 'it has beautiful natural scenery' or 'plenty of natural beauty'; 'some resources for taking pictures' is vague — 'plenty of resources for photography' is clearer. 'Is indicated as' is awkward; use 'is often regarded as' or 'is considered' to express reputation. Remove filler words and complete the final clause.