Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like taking pictures, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Correct tense/use and avoid filler words. Also fix grammar (e.g., "I'm not good at taking photos" and "I often take terrible ones") and prefer vocabulary like "photos" or "pictures" consistently.

Exemplo: Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph landscapes when I travel because photos help me remember places and moods, and I can share them with friends later.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer using singular/plural forms correctly and avoid hesitation. Provide one clear reason and one brief example using linking words (e.g., "because", "for instance"). Replace unclear phrases ("sky rock sky clappers") with correct vocabulary like "skyscrapers" or "busy traffic".

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy nature and quiet surroundings. For instance, I like walking in the countryside to see fields and trees rather than crowded streets with skyscrapers.

Sugestão: Give a clear, direct response and explain briefly why. Use natural collocations (e.g., "I like to travel" or "I'm a frequent traveler") instead of awkward phrases like "trouble goer." Add a specific example of a country or type of view you enjoy to make the answer more concrete.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me experience different cultures and landscapes. For example, I enjoyed the coastal scenery in Portugal last year, which was very different from anything at home.

× Well, to be honest, I'm not good at taking pictures because I always took a terrible one.

✓ Well, to be honest, I'm not good at taking pictures because I always take terrible ones.

The student used the past tense 'took' but refers to a habitual present situation, so present simple 'take' is required. Also use plural 'ones' to refer to multiple pictures. Suggestion: use present simple for habits and match noun number to context.

× Well, I'm a fans of uh, rural area since I like nature.

✓ Well, I'm a fan of rural areas since I like nature.

The phrase 'a fans' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'a fan' (singular) or 'fans' without 'a'. Also 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match general preference. Suggestion: choose singular or plural consistently and remove extra articles.

× I don't like bustling city and the and the sky rock sky clappers.

✓ I don't like bustling cities and skyscrapers.

The original has incorrect word choice and repetition 'the and the' and an incorrect coined term 'sky rock sky clappers.' Use the correct noun 'skyscrapers' and pluralize 'cities' to match general statement. Suggestion: use established vocabulary and correct plural forms.

× I am a trouble goer I would say so I like to travel all around the world and and enjoy other countries views.

✓ I am a troublemaker, I would say, so I like to travel all around the world and enjoy other countries' views.

The phrase 'trouble goer' is nonstandard; likely intended 'troublemaker' or 'adventurous person.' Also punctuation and commas are needed. 'and and' is a repetition. Possessive form 'countries' views' requires an apostrophe: 'countries' views'. Suggestion: choose correct noun, remove repeated words, add commas, and use possessive for 'countries'.

× I am a trouble goer I would say so I like to travel all around the world and and enjoy other countries views.

✓ I would say I'm adventurous, so I like to travel all around the world and enjoy views in other countries.

This offers an improved sentence structure: fronting the comment 'I would say' and using 'adventurous' as a standard adjective. Also 'and and' repetition removed and 'views in other countries' is clearer than unmarked possessive. Suggestion: restructure sentences for clarity and use standard adjectives.