Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and shows enthusiasm, but it is a little long and repetitive. To improve, make a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating ideas (e.g. twice mentioning excitement and taking photos), add one specific detail or brief example, and keep it within 3–4 sentences. Use a linking phrase when adding the detail.

Exemplo: Yes, I do — I love photographing different views because I enjoy capturing landscapes and unique scenes. For example, when I visited a hill station last year, I photographed the sunrise over the valley to capture the changing colors. I usually use my phone and try to frame the scene carefully to show depth.

Sugestão: Good clear preference and sensory details, but the answer repeats similar phrases and uses present-tense desires excessively. Improve by stating the preference succinctly, then give one concrete reason with a linking word and a short example. Avoid emotional repetition like 'I love' three times.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because the natural scenery and open spaces are more peaceful. For example, walking through a village field lets me enjoy the greenery and fresh air, which is more relaxing than noisy city streets.

Sugestão: Your answer gives a clear preference but contains hesitations, repetition, and vague phrasing (e.g. 'very beautiful landscape', 'top most destination'). Improve by making a concise topic sentence, giving one specific example of a place or type of scenery in India, and avoiding filler words. Use a linking word to add the example.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because India offers a huge variety of landscapes. For instance, the Himalayan foothills and Kerala’s backwaters provide very different but stunning scenery, so I usually choose to explore local spots first.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views, so when I see a particular scenery or a landscape, I get very excited and I immediately take out my phone to capture it because I love photography.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views, so when I see a particular scene or a landscape, I get very excited and immediately take out my phone to capture it because I love photography.

Replace 'scenery' with 'scene' because 'a particular scenery' is unidiomatic; 'scenery' is an uncountable noun and should not be used with 'a'. Also remove the repeated 'I' before 'immediately' to improve fluency; this is a style improvement related to verb + -ing flow rather than a grammatical requirement.

× And when I find something interesting, I just cannot stop myself to take a picture of that.

✓ And when I find something interesting, I just cannot stop myself from taking a picture of it.

Use 'stop someone from doing something' collocation and the present participle 'taking' after 'from'. 'Stop myself to take' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'stop myself from taking'. Also change 'that' to 'it' for natural reference.

× I prefer views in rural areas because the landscape is amazing and incredible.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because the landscape is amazing and incredible.

No grammatical change needed for participle forms, but note 'amazing and incredible' are redundant; consider using a single strong adjective for conciseness. This entry is included because redundancy concerns relate to adjective use rather than a listed type; no obligatory correction applied.

× I love the greenery, I love to explore the villages and I want to walk in the fields, feel the fresh breeze on my face and I want to run along in the fields.

✓ I love the greenery; I love exploring the villages and want to walk in the fields, feel the fresh breeze on my face, and run along the fields.

After 'love' it is more natural to use the -ing form 'exploring' rather than 'to explore'. Also maintain parallel structure: use 'want to walk', 'feel', and 'run' in a coordinated list; change 'run along in the fields' to 'run along the fields' or better 'run through the fields'. Ensure commas and conjunctions correctly separate items.

× I prefer views in my country because India is a very beautiful landscape and I believe India is like one of the top most destination even for foreign foreigner tourists to explore.

✓ I prefer views in my country because India has very beautiful landscapes, and I believe India is one of the top destinations for foreign tourists to explore.

'Beautiful landscape' is awkward when referring to a country; use plural 'landscapes' or 'a beautiful country'. Remove the filler 'is like'. 'Top most' is incorrect; use 'one of the top destinations'. 'Foreign foreigner tourists' is redundant; use 'foreign tourists'. Adjust verb and article usage for natural phrasing.

× And I think India has vast landscapes and uh, scenery.

✓ And I think India has vast landscapes and beautiful scenery.

Avoid filler 'uh' in formal answers. 'Vast landscapes and scenery' is slightly awkward; use 'vast landscapes and beautiful scenery' to parallel the adjectives and improve sentence cohesion.