Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more balanced and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one brief reason with a specific example. Avoid absolute language like “waste of time” and reduce redundancy. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word to connect your reason.

Exemplo: Not really. I prefer taking photos of myself because I enjoy capturing personal memories and expressions. For example, when I travel I take selfies at landmarks to remember how I felt that day.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly. Begin with a topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / moreover). Avoid unclear phrases and contradicting comments in the same answer. Keep sentences concise and focused on concrete details (e.g., types of landscapes, emotions they evoke).

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they make me feel nostalgic and relaxed. For instance, rolling hills and old farms remind me of childhood summers, and the quiet atmosphere helps me unwind.

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and a brief example or contrast. Use linking words like “because” or “for example” and replace vague words (e.g., “really unique”) with more precise descriptions.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer landscapes and cultural scenes I haven’t seen before. For example, seeing rice terraces in Southeast Asia or colorful colonial streets in Europe feels distinctive compared with familiar local scenery.

× How do you prefer views in rural areas?

✓ Do you prefer views in rural areas?

The original sentence uses an incorrect question structure. 'How do you prefer views in rural areas?' is awkward and ungrammatical because 'how' asks about manner, not choice. The correct form is the yes/no question 'Do you prefer views in rural areas?' which matches the examiner's prompt. Use the auxiliary 'do' + subject + main verb for present simple yes/no questions.

× It is because it provides me a nostalgic feeling around it and I do enjoy nature.

✓ It is because it gives me a nostalgic feeling and I enjoy nature.

'Provides me a nostalgic feeling around it' misuses the preposition 'around' and the verb 'provide' is less natural here. Use 'give' collocated with 'feeling' and omit 'around it'. Also 'do enjoy' is unnecessary for affirmative sentences; simple present 'enjoy' is preferred. This makes the sentence natural and grammatically correct.

× Well what areas they kind of look up at too?

✓ Well, what I mean is that the areas kind of look downcast too.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. 'What areas they kind of look up at too?' lacks proper word order for a question and unclear referent. I suggested rephrasing to a clear declarative that likely matches intended meaning: describing the areas' appearance. If the speaker intended a question, reframe as 'Which areas do you mean?' depending on context. Maintain subject-verb order for statements and auxiliary inversion for questions.

× At the same time it looks kinda depressing.

✓ At the same time, it looks kind of depressing.

'Kinda' is informal/slang and 'kind of' is the standard colloquial form. Also add a comma after the introductory phrase 'At the same time'. Use 'kind of' when speaking informally, but avoid 'kinda' in more formal responses.

× I prefer views in another country, not because I don't value my country's views, it is because I I really find the views from another country really unique, different.

✓ I prefer views in other countries, not because I don't value my country's views, but because I find views in other countries really unique and different.

Several issues: 'another country' vs 'other countries' inconsistency — use plural 'other countries' to match general preference. The sentence is a comma splice; replace comma with 'but' to join clauses correctly. Duplicate 'I' ('I I') is a typo. Avoid repeating 'really' twice and use 'unique and different' or better 'unique' alone. Maintain present simple for general preferences.

× It's not that something that I see often.

✓ It's not something that I see often.

The original has an extra 'that' creating redundancy: 'It's not that something that I see often.' Remove the first 'that' to form the correct relative clause 'It's not something that I see often.' This fixes sentence structure and makes the meaning clear.