Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ответ естественный и понятный, но есть дублирование слов («pictures and photos»), некоторая неуклюжесть в формулировках и можно добавить больше конкретики. Постарайтесь избегать тавтологии, использовать более точную лексику и удерживать ответ в пределах 2–4 предложений. Например, начните с чётного топик‑предложения, затем добавьте одно конкретное объяснение или пример.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often photograph loved ones and natural landscapes because my parents used to document family trips, which inspired me. For example, last summer I took a series of landscape shots at a nearby lake that I printed and framed.

Sugestão: Ответ понятен, но перегружен словами-паразитами («uh») и повторениями («because of it»). Формулировка слишком длинная и не структурирована: лучше одно чёткое топик‑предложение и одно или два поддерживающих предложения с связками. Уберите заполнители, используйте связки (for example, because, so) и приведите конкретное объяснение того, как сельская местность улучшает фотографии.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and less crowded. For example, the calm atmosphere allows me to focus on composition and capture natural lighting, which often results in better photos.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки («I they can remind me some»), паузы и слова-паразиты, а также незавершённое окончание мысли («capture new»). Нужно исправить грамматику, убрать заполнители и закончить предложение. Также добавьте конкретный пример или контраст, чтобы усилить содержание.

Exemplo: I enjoy both. Pictures from my country make me feel nostalgic by reminding me of familiar places, like my childhood neighborhood, while photos taken abroad are exciting because they capture new cultures and landscapes, such as colorful markets I visited last year.

× I have always enjoyed taking pictures and photos of people who I love and landscapes.

✓ I have always enjoyed taking pictures and photos of people I love and of landscapes.

The relative pronoun 'who' is unnecessary after 'people' when followed directly by the verb 'love'; use the object form without 'who'. Also parallel structure requires 'of landscapes' to match 'of people'. Suggestion: remove 'who' and add 'of' before 'landscapes' to keep parallelism.

× I believe that I inherited it from my parents because they always captured memories.

✓ I believe that I inherited it from my parents because they always capture memories.

The speaker refers to a habitual or general trait of the parents (present habitual), so present simple 'capture' is more appropriate than past 'captured' if the trait is ongoing. Use 'capture' to indicate repeated action. If the intention was a past one-time action, keep 'captured' and clarify context.

× I prefer views in rural areas, uh, because they are not very crowded and, uh, I believe that, uh, spending time there helps me to relax and, uh, to make photos better because of it.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they are not very crowded, and I believe that spending time there helps me relax and take better photos.

Remove filler 'uh' and simplify. 'Helps me to relax' can be 'helps me relax' (both are acceptable); 'to make photos better because of it' is awkward—use 'take better photos'. Ensure parallel infinitive structure: 'helps me relax and take better photos.' This addresses sentence structure and word choice issues.

× Actually, I prefer both because when I take pictures in my own country, I they can remind me some, uh, familiar places and I can feel nostalgic after that.

✓ Actually, I prefer both because when I take pictures in my own country, they can remind me of some familiar places and make me feel nostalgic.

Remove stray 'I'. Use 'remind me of' (correct preposition). 'Some familiar places' should follow 'of'. 'I can feel nostalgic after that' is wordy; 'make me feel nostalgic' is more natural. This fixes pronoun error, preposition use, and sentence structure.

× On the other hand, photos from other places are very exciting and special because I can capture new.

✓ On the other hand, photos from other places are very exciting and special because I can capture new scenes and experiences.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'capture new' which is incomplete. Add the nouns 'scenes and experiences' to complete the idea. This corrects sentence structure and provides a clear object for 'capture'.