Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct word choice and grammar (e.g., 'post' instead of 'implode', and 'attract people' or 'make my profile attractive'). Keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I mainly do this because I like sharing interesting images on social media, and varied views make my feed more attractive. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes to show different moods.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first, then provide specific supporting details and use linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example'). Correct grammar (e.g., 'pictures of views', 'those places', 'they attract me'). Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid trailing phrases.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones. I find fields and old houses more appealing because they look simple and peaceful; for example, I like photographing a farmhouse at golden hour to capture its quiet atmosphere.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference and explain briefly with specific reasons. Use linking words (e.g., 'however', 'for instance') and correct phrasing ('take photos in', 'I prefer views in other countries because...'). Avoid vague phrases and finish sentences cleanly.

Exemplo: I enjoy photographing views in my own country, but I prefer taking photos abroad because countries like Canada or Australia offer dramatic landscapes and varied backgrounds. For instance, I would love to shoot coastal cliffs in Australia for their striking scenery.

× I like to take pictures in different views because I love to take pictures because I am because I'm using social media and I am interested to implode my pictures on social media and makes the people attractive for me and I think it's a.

✓ I like to take pictures of different scenes because I love photography, and I use social media to post my pictures to attract people, and I think it's fun.

Errors: repeated fragments, incorrect verb forms ('interested to implode' and 'makes the people attractive for me'), and awkward noun choice 'views'. Use gerunds and correct verbs: 'post' or 'upload' instead of 'implode'; change 'makes the people attractive for me' to 'to attract people'. Also replace 'views' with 'scenes' or 'shots'. Remove redundancies and finish the sentence. Suggestion: use clear verbs after 'interested' (e.g., 'interested in posting'), maintain parallel structure, and avoid repetition. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× Well I like both urban and rural areas but I prefer to take pictures views in rural areas because there are fields and so many old houses.

✓ Well, I like both urban and rural areas, but I prefer to take pictures in rural areas because there are fields and many old houses.

Errors: 'take pictures views' is incorrect phrase; use 'take pictures in' or 'take views of'. Remove redundant 'so' before 'many'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: say 'take pictures in rural areas' or 'take pictures of rural scenes.' Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I prefer to take pictures from at that places because it attract me and makes views simple and sober which is good which is.

✓ I prefer to take pictures at those places because they attract me, and the scenes look simple and sober, which I like.

Errors: wrong prepositions 'from at' should be 'at' or 'in'; 'that places' should be 'those places' (demonstrative + plural); subject-verb agreement 'it attract me' should be 'they attract me'; awkward phrase 'makes views simple' better as 'the scenes look simple'. Suggestion: match demonstratives to number, use correct prepositions, and ensure subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Well, I like to take views in my country but by searching on social media I like to prefer take views in other countries like Canada, Australia, USA because the environment is good and background is also absolutely fantastic and I like to take pictures in that countries mostly I.

✓ Well, I like to photograph scenes in my country, but after searching on social media I prefer to take photos in other countries like Canada, Australia, and the USA because the environment and backgrounds are fantastic, and I mostly like to take pictures there.

Errors: 'take views' is unnatural; use 'take photos' or 'photograph scenes'. 'by searching on social media I like to prefer take views' is ungrammatical—use 'after searching on social media, I prefer'. 'that countries' should be 'those countries' or 'the countries' and 'USA' needs 'the' when used as 'the USA'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'background is' should be 'backgrounds are' or 'the background is'. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('take photos', 'prefer to'), correct prepositions ('in', 'after'), and correct articles with country names. Grammar problem type ID: 11