Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatical, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct verb forms, and limit to 2–3 sentences. Add a brief specific detail (what scenes you like) and a linking phrase to explain why.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take pictures of coastlines and mountain landscapes because they help me remember trips and capture the atmosphere.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid repetition. Use correct articles and plural forms, and give one or two specific reasons with linking words (because, so). Replace vague phrases with concrete descriptions.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because the scenery is more peaceful and the air is fresher. For example, I enjoy quiet fields and tree-lined roads where I can relax and take clearer photos.

Sugestão: Be concise and fluent: give a direct answer, avoid fillers, and explain with a specific reason or example. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'new' not 'news'; 'countryside' or 'places') and include a linking word (because, so, for example).

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering new landscapes and cultures. For instance, visiting rural villages abroad lets me photograph unfamiliar architecture and try local foods, which makes travel more exciting.

× I think everybody like taking pictures of different views.

✓ I think everybody likes taking pictures of different views.

The subject 'everybody' is singular and requires a singular verb form. Use 'likes' (third person singular) instead of 'like'. Suggestion: Pair indefinite pronouns like 'everybody' with singular verbs (e.g., 'everybody likes').

× So do I uh, when I go out uh, for the first one, I like to uh, taking pictures of different uh, sceneries, uh and uh, I like to keep them and uh, to remember the trip.

✓ So do I. When I go out, for the first time, I like to take pictures of different sceneries, and I like to keep them to remember the trip.

Multiple issues: 'taking' after 'like to' is incorrect because 'like to' should be followed by the base verb form (verb infinitive without 'to' repeated). 'For the first one' is unclear; 'for the first time' fits the context. 'Sceneries' is acceptable but 'scenery' is often uncountable; however plural 'sceneries' can be used. Also punctuation and filler words were cleaned. Suggestion: Use 'like to' + base verb (e.g., 'like to take') and clear time expressions ('first time').

× Actually I prefer a views in a rural areas areas because views in rural areas are scenic, the areas fresher as a clean vessel and the scenic scenery. I soak up.

✓ Actually I prefer views in rural areas because the views in rural areas are scenic; the areas are fresher and cleaner, and I can soak them up.

Several article and noun form errors: 'a views' mixes singular article with plural noun — remove 'a'. 'a rural areas' wrong article and number — use 'rural areas' without 'a'. 'the areas fresher as a clean vessel' is ungrammatical and unclear; corrected to 'the areas are fresher and cleaner'. 'soak up' is a phrasal verb that needs an object; use 'soak them up' referring to the views. Suggestion: Match articles to noun number (no 'a' with plural), use 'are' for adjective predicates, and ensure phrasal verbs have correct objects.

× I prefer views in, uh, other countries. Uh, I think that, uh, the views in other countries are, uh, news and, uh, are new and I uh, like to, uh, adventure in a new, uh, countryside, uh, for. Seeing new team.

✓ I prefer views in other countries. I think that the views in other countries are new, and I like to explore a new countryside to see new things.

Multiple issues: 'news' is incorrect word choice; 'new' is correct. 'Adventure' is a noun; the intended verb is 'explore' or 'have adventures in'. 'a new countryside' is acceptable but 'countryside' often used without article when general; here 'a new countryside' works. 'for. Seeing new team' is ungrammatical — likely 'to see new things'. Suggestion: Use correct part of speech (verb vs noun), choose appropriate vocabulary ('explore' instead of 'adventure' as a verb), and ensure phrases like 'to see new things' are complete and grammatical.