Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like taking photos, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid fillers (uh, you know) and repetition. Also correct simple grammar (e.g., “it seems so good” → “they look great”).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember special places. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset and rural fields in the morning, which capture different colours and moods.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly with a clear preference and give at least one specific reason. Use a topic sentence and one supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid saying only ‘no’ or repeating hesitations.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more relaxing. For instance, I like open fields and hills where I can enjoy fresh air and peaceful scenery.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details and a brief example. Improve grammar (e.g., “It's looks” → “They look”) and remove fillers. Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘for example’ to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they are beautiful and peaceful with lots of greenery. For example, when I go on weekend trips I enjoy looking at hills and wide fields, which help me relax and feel refreshed.

× Yes, I like the pictures of different views because it's it seems so good where I stand and capture a view and my pictures and something you know.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they look good when I stand and capture a scene.

This sentence has multiple structural problems (Grammar problem type ID 26). There are unnecessary repetitions ('it's it seems'), incorrect noun phrase use ('my pictures and something'), and awkward coordination. I corrected the sentence by using the gerund 'taking' to match the question, replacing 'the pictures of different views' with 'taking pictures of different views' for clarity, using the plural pronoun 'they' to refer to pictures, and simplifying 'capture a view and my pictures' to 'capture a scene'. Suggestion: break long ideas into shorter clauses, avoid repetition, and ensure pronouns clearly refer to their antecedents.

× No, no. Umm no.

✓ No, I don't have a preference.

The original reply contains no main verb and is therefore a sentence without a verb (Grammar problem type ID 23). To answer the question about preference, a full clause with a verb is required. I provided 'I don't have a preference' which directly addresses the question and includes the necessary auxiliary verb 'do' and negation 'not'. Suggestion: respond with a complete clause containing a subject and verb.

× I prefer, uh, views in my country, you know, It's looks so beautiful.

✓ I prefer views in my country; it looks so beautiful.

The sentence misuses the pronoun and verb combination (Grammar problem type ID 12). 'It's looks' incorrectly combines contraction 'it's' (it is) with a third-person singular verb 'looks', causing redundancy. I corrected it to 'it looks' so the subject 'it' is followed by the correct verb form. Also removed filler words for clarity. Suggestion: avoid combining contractions with additional verbs; use either 'it's' + adjective or 'it' + verb, not both.

× And peaceful with a lot of greenery and open space.

✓ It is also peaceful, with a lot of greenery and open space.

This fragment lacks a clear subject-verb structure and functions as an incomplete sentence using adjectives (Grammar problem type ID 13). I added the subject 'It is also' to form a complete sentence and placed the adjective 'peaceful' correctly before the noun phrases. Suggestion: ensure descriptive clauses include a subject and verb when standing alone.

× For example, I enjoy looking at hills and fields when I go on week.

✓ For example, I enjoy looking at hills and fields when I go on weekend trips or on weekends.

The phrase 'go on week' is ungrammatical (Grammar problem type ID 6: Present tense issue / also sentence structure ID 26). Likely intended meaning is 'on weekends' or 'on weekend trips.' I replaced it with two natural alternatives. Suggestion: use established time expressions like 'on weekends' or 'on weekend trips' to indicate habitual actions.