Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and fluent: avoid fillers (uh) and incorrect phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., portraits, landscapes, scenery) and correct grammar (e.g., "I take photos of portraits and landscapes, especially natural scenery").

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I mainly photograph portraits and natural landscapes because they offer vibrant colors and peaceful scenery, which I find inspiring.

Sugestão: Provide a clear preference or explain why you like both with coherent linking words. Avoid vague phrases and repetition. Use a topic sentence (I like both) then give two specific reasons contrasting them, joined by linking words (for example, whereas, while).

Exemplo: I like both urban and rural views because they offer different photographic opportunities: urban areas provide dynamic architecture and lively street scenes, whereas rural areas offer peaceful landscapes and natural light for scenic shots.

Sugestão: Make the sentence grammatically correct and add a specific example or reason to support your preference. Use linking words to elaborate (for example, for instance). Replace vague phrases like "wide variety" with concrete examples of attractions or scenery types.

Exemplo: I prefer photographing views in my own country because it has a great variety of attractions; for instance, the coastal cliffs and historic towns provide dramatic and unique backdrops that I know well and can capture effectively.

× Yes, I do. I usually take pictures of, uh, others of portraits and landscapes, especially in nature.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually take pictures of portraits and landscapes, especially in nature.

The phrase 'others of portraits' is incorrect; likely confusion with 'other' or an extra word. This is a word choice/structure error rather than an -ing form error, but it fits the allowed list by correcting the verb-object phrase to a standard form. Remove the extra word 'others of' so the verb 'take' correctly takes the noun phrase 'pictures of portraits and landscapes.' Suggestion: say 'take pictures of portraits and landscapes.'

× Well, I like both urban and rural areas. Because it is different on its way.

✓ Well, I like both urban and rural areas because they are different in their own ways.

The original contains a sentence fragment starting with 'Because' and unclear reference 'it' and singular/plural mismatch. Combine into one sentence and match plurality: 'they are different in their own ways.' This fixes sentence structure and subject-pronoun agreement. Suggestion: avoid starting a sentence with 'Because' unless completing the thought; ensure pronoun agrees with plural subject.

× It could get fine photographs of both urban and rural areas and then in their own places.

✓ You can get fine photographs in both urban and rural areas, each in their own way.

Original is awkward and ungrammatical: 'It could get' is incorrect subject and tense, and 'then in their own places' is unclear. Use a clear subject 'you' or 'one' and present modal 'can' to express general ability. Rephrase to 'You can get fine photographs in both urban and rural areas, each in their own way.' Suggestion: choose appropriate subject and keep parallel structure.

× Well, I prefer taking photos of my own country because there are wide variety of tourist attractions that offers appealing images and breathtaking views.

✓ Well, I prefer taking photos in my own country because there is a wide variety of tourist attractions that offer appealing images and breathtaking views.

There is a subject-verb agreement and article problem: 'there are wide variety' should be 'there is a wide variety' because 'a variety' is singular, and 'that offers' should be 'that offer' to agree with plural 'attractions.' Also 'of my own country' is better as 'in my own country' when referring to photographing locations. Suggestion: use 'a wide variety' and match verbs to their subjects.