Views— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Candidato
Yes, I do love taking photo a variance of view because in my country I have seen the same view every day and every day. So when I go to the different pace I like to take a photo to keep it as my memory.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Candidato
I prefer urban allure. Even I came from the rural areas because I was born in Chong Li where it is not the capital of my country. But when I finish my universe.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Candidato
I prefer the wheels in other countries because I have travel around the world like almost 10 countries and I found that there are many amazing view more than my country.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Pontuação: 58.0Sugestão: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (photo → photos, variance → variety, pace → place), and avoid repetition. Add one specific detail (what you photograph and why) and use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep to 2–4 sentences.
Exemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. In my country the scenery is often quite similar, so when I visit new places I photograph landscapes or city streets to remember their colours and atmosphere.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Answer directly and coherently: say clearly which you prefer and give a specific reason. Correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g. 'urban areas' instead of 'urban allure', 'I come from' and 'Chong Li' background can be a brief supporting detail). Avoid confusing or incomplete sentences. Use one linking word to add the reason.
Exemplo: I prefer urban areas because I enjoy modern architecture and lively street scenes. Although I come from a rural town called Chong Li, I find cities offer more variety for photography and interesting activities.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: Be precise and grammatical: directly state your preference (other countries) and give a clear, specific reason. Correct verb forms (travel → travelled/traveled), word choice (wheels → views?), and add one concrete example of a view you liked abroad. Use a linking word to explain the contrast.
Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I have travelled to nearly ten countries and discovered landscapes and architecture quite different from home. For example, I loved the colourful coastal towns in Portugal which felt very different from the scenery in my country.
Gramática
× Yes, I do love taking photo a variance of view because in my country I have seen the same view every day and every day.
✓ Yes, I do love taking photos of a variety of views because in my country I see the same view every day.
Errors: 'taking photo' should be plural 'taking photos' when speaking generally (plural issue/word form). 'a variance of view' is incorrect phrasing; use 'a variety of views'. 'I have seen the same view every day and every day' is repetitive and uses present perfect where simple present is better for habitual action: use 'I see the same view every day'. Suggestion: use 'taking photos of a variety of views' and use simple present for habits.'},{
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