Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve fluency, reduce hesitation and repetition, correct factual inconsistency (sunset at morning), and add one specific detail. Use a clear topic sentence, one linking phrase, and a supporting detail. Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I love photographing different views. For example, when I go jogging with my friends in the evening, I often stop to capture the sunset because the sky turns vivid orange and reflects on nearby buildings.

Sugestão: Make the answer relevant and coherent: state preference clearly, give specific reasons, avoid unrelated phrases ("straight leg"). Use linking words and precise vocabulary about urban features. Keep it concise and structured.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because the city lights and modern architecture create interesting patterns at night. For instance, I enjoy photographing illuminated skyscrapers and busy streets that show the city’s energy.

Sugestão: Reduce repetition and improve grammar: state preference, explain why, and briefly acknowledge interest in foreign views with a clear example. Use linking words and a concise supporting detail.

Exemplo: I generally prefer views in my own country because I know the landscapes and local culture well. However, I would love to visit places like London one day to photograph its historic streets and iconic landmarks.

× For example, when I I when I jogging with my friends, uh, at morning I love to take a picture of sunset.

✓ For example, when I jog with my friends in the morning I love to take pictures of the sunrise.

Original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect verb form 'jogging' after 'when I' should be base form 'jog' (present tense clause) (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). Duplicate words 'I I when I' are repetition/fluency but not in the list so only grammatical correction applied. 'at morning' is wrong preposition and article; correct phrase is 'in the morning' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). 'a picture of sunset' should be plural 'pictures' to match habitual action or can be 'a picture of the sunrise/sunset'; I chose 'pictures' and 'sunrise' to match morning. Suggestion: use simple present form after 'when I' (when I jog), use 'in the morning' and ensure noun number matches context (pictures for habitual actions).

× I prefer views in urban areas because I find uh, lights from the building, uh, and for example, I enjoy my uh, straight leg.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I like the lights from the buildings; for example, I enjoy the straight lines of the architecture.

The main grammatical issue is prepositions and article usage: 'lights from the building' should be 'lights from the buildings' (plural to match general statement) or 'the building' with article (Grammar Problem Type ID 11 and 1). The original also contains an unclear fragment 'I enjoy my straight leg' which seems incorrect word choice; I corrected it to 'I enjoy the straight lines of the architecture' to convey a plausible meaning and to fix adjective/noun use (Incorrect use of adjectives or nouns, ID 13). Suggestion: choose correct prepositions ('from the buildings') and correct noun phrases that express your idea clearly; ensure pluralization when speaking generally about many buildings.

× I prefer views in my country, but if one day I get I get opportunity to treasure another country, example London. I really love that.

✓ I prefer views in my country, but if one day I get the opportunity to travel to another country, for example London, I would really enjoy that.

Problems include tense and word choice: 'if one day I get I get opportunity' repeats words and lacks article 'the' before 'opportunity' (Present tense issue, ID 6; Article errors, ID 22). 'Treasure another country' is incorrect verb choice; the intended verb is 'travel' (Incorrect use of verbs/word choice, mapped to Present tense issue ID 6). Also, conditional structure requires 'would' for the result clause to sound natural: 'if I get the opportunity... I would really enjoy that' (Future/conditional nuance but corrected to natural conditional). Suggestion: use 'get the opportunity' with the definite article, use 'travel to' for visiting another country, and add 'would' for the conditional result.