Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and relevant, but it is a bit repetitive and has some small grammatical errors. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, correct grammar (e.g., “if you go through my gallery”), and add one specific detail or short example. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use a linking phrase when adding the example.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy photographing different views. If you look through my gallery, you’ll see a variety of landscapes and cityscapes that I’ve captured. For example, I often photograph sunsets over the river because the light there changes every evening.

Sugestão: Good idea to state a clear preference for a mix, but the answer is slightly disorganized and contains repetition (‘rural rural’) and vague phrases (‘very specific setting’). Improve by using a concise topic sentence, then give two distinct, specific supporting details with a linking word (e.g., ‘for example’ or ‘however’). Correct small errors and avoid repeating words.

Exemplo: I prefer a mix of both urban and rural views. For example, urban scenes with streetlights and busy streets create dramatic night photos, while rural settings—such as fields with cows, bicycles, and children playing—offer calm, timeless compositions.

Sugestão: The answer conveys sentiment but is wordy and contains hesitations and informal fillers (e.g., ‘I mean’, ‘it's more it's’). To improve, use one clear topic sentence stating your balanced preference, then provide two concise, specific reasons—one for home views and one for foreign views—linked with a connector like ‘while’ or ‘however’. Avoid fillers and fix grammatical slips.

Exemplo: I enjoy views from both my own country and abroad. I feel grounded by familiar landscapes at home because they are meaningful and aesthetically pleasing, while views in other countries fascinate me because they offer different architecture and cultural scenes.

× Oh yes, I do love taking pictures of different views.

✓ Oh yes, I do love taking pictures of different views.

No grammatical correction needed. The present participle 'taking' correctly follows 'love'. Keep as is.

× In fact if you see go through my gallery you will notice different variety of views which I love the most.

✓ In fact, if you go through my gallery you will notice a variety of views that I love the most.

This sentence has word order and article issues. 'see go through' is incorrect sequence; use 'go through'. 'different variety' is redundant; 'a variety' is correct and requires the indefinite article 'a'. Use 'that' instead of 'which' to introduce a restrictive clause. Add commas after introductory phrase for clarity.

× I think I like a mix of both because I have observed myself clicking pictures of urban areas with the street lights and also the rural areas with a very specific setting.

✓ I think I like a mix of both because I have noticed myself taking pictures of urban areas with street lights and rural areas with specific settings.

'Observed myself clicking pictures' is awkward; use 'noticed myself taking pictures'. 'the street lights' is unnecessary; use 'street lights' (general reference). 'a very specific setting' is vague and singular while referring to rural scenes generally; use 'specific settings' to match plural meaning. These changes improve naturalness and agreement.

× Rural rural setting, like cows or bicycles or kids playing on this.

✓ Rural settings, like cows, bicycles, or kids playing.

The phrase repeats 'Rural' incorrectly and lacks parallel punctuation. Use plural 'settings' to match examples. Remove 'on this' which is ungrammatical. Use commas to separate list items.

× Again, it is a mix of both.

✓ Again, it's a mix of both.

No major grammatical error; contraction 'it's' is more natural in speech. Sentence structure is fine.

× I mean, I love my country views.

✓ I mean, I love the views of my country.

'My country views' is understandable but unidiomatic. Using 'the views of my country' is clearer and follows English noun phrase patterns.

× It's more it's, I feel very grounded to it and it's very aesthetic.

✓ It's just that I feel very grounded by it, and I find it very aesthetic.

Original has repetition 'it's more it's' and awkward 'grounded to it'. Use 'just that' to clarify idea; 'grounded by it' or 'grounded in it' is more idiomatic. 'I find it very aesthetic' is a clearer expression.

× And also the views of other countries are beautiful as well.

✓ The views of other countries are beautiful as well.

Beginning with 'And also' is redundant. Remove 'And also' to make the sentence more concise. The rest is grammatically correct.

× I mean they have a different touch to it.

✓ I mean they have a different feel to them.

Mismatch between plural subject 'they' and singular 'it' causes pronoun reference error. 'A different touch to it' is slightly informal; 'a different feel to them' matches plural and is natural. Alternatively, 'a different character' could be used.