Music— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, umm), use correct verb forms and articles, and limit to 2–4 sentences. Add one specific example to make your answer more vivid. Use linking words like “when” or “so” correctly.

Exemplo: I usually choose music based on my mood. When I feel sad, I like slow, acoustic songs because they help me reflect; when I’m happy, I prefer upbeat pop or dance music to match my energy.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly with correct grammar and fewer hesitations. Begin with a clear statement, use linking words like “because” to give one or two specific reasons, and avoid vague phrases such as “make my time.” Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, upbeat music definitely makes me more excited because the fast tempo and strong rhythm increase my energy. For example, when I hear lively pop after getting good news, I feel motivated to celebrate and move around.

× Actually it's depend on mood.

✓ Actually it depends on my mood.

The verb 'depend' needs third-person singular agreement with the subject 'it' in the present tense, so use 'depends'. Also add 'my' to clarify possession: 'my mood'. Suggestion: use 'it depends on my mood' for correct present-tense subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× When I uh, feel very sad, then I prefer sad music and when I feel very happy I always prefer umm, many happy music.

✓ When I feel very sad, I prefer sad music, and when I feel very happy, I prefer a lot of happy music.

Use consistent simple present tense 'prefer' for habitual actions (no auxiliary needed). Replace 'many happy music' with 'a lot of happy music' because 'music' is uncountable and cannot take 'many'. Also add commas for clarity.

× So it's depend on mood on time.

✓ So it depends on my mood at the time.

Again use 'depends' for third-person singular. Use 'my mood' for clarity and 'at the time' as the correct prepositional phrase rather than 'on time'. This corrects present-tense agreement and preposition choice.

× Well, uh, it is very interesting question.

✓ Well, uh, that is a very interesting question.

English requires an article before 'very interesting question'—use 'a'. Also use 'that' or 'this' as a demonstrative pronoun to refer to the question. The corrected sentence improves sentence structure and article use.

× Upbeat music, uh, make me feel more excited because, uh, it's make my time, uh, when I very happy, uh, to get any, uh, good news or any, uh, memo.

✓ Upbeat music makes me feel more excited because it makes the moment when I am very happy feel even better, especially when I receive good news.

'Upbeat music' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' (subject-verb agreement). Similarly 'it makes' not 'it's make'. Use 'the moment' rather than 'my time' for natural phrasing. Insert 'I am' for the present tense 'when I am very happy'. 'Any memo' is unnatural; replace with 'good news' or 'messages'. The corrected sentence fixes subject-verb agreement, verb forms, article use, and improves overall clarity and naturalness.