Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and article errors, avoid repetition, and keep it within 3–4 sentences. For example, use past simple consistently and replace vague phrases with specific details (e.g., the age you were, type or color of bike, where you learned).

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used training wheels at first, but one day they came off while I was practicing in the park, so I realized I could balance without them. After that I felt more confident and rode my bike all over the neighborhood.

Sugestão: Provide a direct opinion in one sentence, then add a specific reason and an example using linking words. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and finish the thought—don’t trail off. Aim for 2–3 sentences. Mention exceptions if relevant (e.g., fitness, commuting, rural areas).

Exemplo: Not really — bikes are mainly used by children for play. However, some adults use bicycles for exercise or short commutes in the city, especially when traffic is bad.

× Yes, I remember I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I remember I had a bike when I was a child.

Past tense issue (ID 5) and subject-verb agreement with time reference: The speaker refers to a past time 'when I was a child', so the verb should be in the past tense 'had' not present 'have'. Use consistent past tense for memories of childhood.

× So I remember that when I'm do playing with my bike, I have a training wheels.

✓ So I remember that when I was playing with my bike, I had training wheels.

Multiple issues: Incorrect auxiliary/present tense and verb form (ID 6 and 8) and singular/plural/article errors (ID 1 and 22). The time frame is past, so use past continuous 'was playing'. 'I have' should be past 'I had'. 'Training wheels' is plural and does not need the indefinite article 'a'. Use 'training wheels' or 'a training wheel' correctly.

× Then suddenly my training wheels went up.

✓ Then suddenly my training wheels came off.

Word choice and tense: While tense (past) is correct, the phrase 'went up' is unnatural for losing training wheels. Use 'came off' to describe training wheels detaching. This keeps past tense consistent (ID 6).

× Then I realized that I can I can balance even without training wheels.

✓ Then I realized that I could balance even without training wheels.

Modal and tense error (ID 4 and 6): 'realized' is past so the following ability should be expressed in past modal 'could' instead of present 'can'. Also remove the duplicate 'I can'. 'Training wheels' remains plural.

× Umm not really because bikes is just for kids but but if you were are talking about what are.

✓ Umm, not really, because bikes are just for kids. But if you are talking about...

Subject-verb agreement (ID 27/1) and sentence structure (ID 26): 'bikes' is plural so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. The sentence is also incomplete and contains extra words 'were' and repeated 'but'. For clarity, use 'if you are talking about...' to start a conditional clause and complete the thought.