Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is direct and grammatically correct, but it's very short and doesn't add any supporting detail. To improve, give a brief reason or a short related detail (e.g. who taught you to ride later, or whether you wished for one). Keep it natural and stay within 1–3 sentences. Use a linking phrase if you add extra info (for example, “because” or “but”).

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. However, I learned to ride a neighbor's bike when I was ten, which I enjoyed a lot.

Sugestão: Your answer gives an opinion but has repetition and unclear phrasing (“unapproved route” and duplicated words). Improve by choosing clearer vocabulary, avoiding repetition, and providing a specific example or reason. Use a linking word (e.g. “because” or “for example”) to add one supporting detail. Limit to 2–3 sentences and be concise.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many people use bicycles to commute short distances and you can often see them on small streets and markets.

× It's really they are really popular.

✓ They are really popular.

This sentence contains redundant phrasing and a sentence structure error (fits Grammar Problem Type ID 26: Sentence structure errors). The clause 'It's really they are really popular' repeats the idea and mixes two clause types incorrectly. The correct form is a single independent clause 'They are really popular.' Suggestion: remove the redundant 'It's really' and keep one clear statement. Use 'They are really popular' to match the present-tense question about general popularity.

× You can see them almost in every unapproved route in my country.

✓ You can see them on almost every unofficial route in my country.

The original sentence has a preposition and word choice issue (Grammar Problem Type ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). 'See them in every route' is unnatural; the correct preposition for roads or routes is 'on'. Also 'unapproved route' is an odd collocation; 'unofficial route' fits better to express routes that are not formal. Suggestion: use 'on' with roads/routes and choose appropriate adjective collocations like 'unofficial' or 'minor'.