Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), then add a brief supporting detail using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Focus on past tense (I had / my mother gave me), reduce filler words (like, uh), and provide one or two specific details (age, how you learned) within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother gave it to me for my tenth birthday, and at first I felt nervous because I had never ridden one before. However, after practicing with my father in the park for a few weeks, I became confident and used it every day.

Sugestão: Answer directly, use clear reasons with linking words, and give a complete example. Avoid repetition and fill words. Use correct grammar (is/are, possessive forms) and complete the example sentence. Be specific about why bikes are popular (cost, traffic, fuel efficiency) and give a short, coherent personal example.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheaper to buy and run, and they make it easier to get through heavy traffic. For example, a friend of mine owns a black Pulsar that he uses every day to commute to work because it is fast and economical.

× Yes I do have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about having a bike when you were a child, so the past tense should be used. Replace present simple 'do have' with past simple 'had' to match the time frame. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for natural speech punctuation.

× When I was a child I remember my mother gifted me a bike on my birthday and 1st in the starting I was like little worried like I never drive any bike before but after driving that I was become confident and that was the first one.

✓ When I was a child, I remember my mother gifted me a bike on my birthday. At first I was a little worried because I had never ridden a bike before, but after riding it I became confident, and that was my first bike.

Multiple past-tense errors and sentence-structure issues: use past perfect 'had never ridden' to show an action before another past action, use past simple 'became' not 'was become', and replace 'drive' with 'ride' for a bike. Split into two sentences and fix articles and word order for clarity.

× Bike bikes are very popular in my country uh, because uh that, that is the cheapest mode of transportation in my country and my friend and back home also have the fastest bike.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country because they are the cheapest mode of transportation, and my friends back home also have fast bikes.

Remove filler words and repetition. Use plural 'bikes' and refer with plural pronoun 'they'. Fix agreement: 'friends' plural and 'fast bikes' plural. Simplify and correct word order for natural English.

× I remember he does have a black colour pulsar, which is used for the.

✓ I remember he has a black Pulsar motorcycle.

Avoid auxiliary 'does' in affirmative past recollection; use 'he has' or 'he had' depending on time. 'Black colour' is awkward; use 'black'. 'Pulsar' is a model name and 'motorcycle' clarifies the noun. Remove incomplete clause 'which is used for the.'