Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Expand your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). Use linking words (for example, because, so, when) to make it coherent. Mention who the bike belonged to, how often you used it, or a brief memory to enrich the response.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I rode it almost every afternoon after school. Because the streets near our house were quiet, I felt confident practising tricks and riding with my friends.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence answering the question, then support it with specific, coherent reasons or examples. Avoid unclear or incomplete phrases. Use linking words (for example, for instance, also) and correct grammar (e.g., 'many mothers' not 'as a mother'). Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For instance, many people use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient, and some parents, including mothers, ride them to take children to school. Also, cycling has become more common among office workers in cities where traffic is heavy.

× Yes I do as a mother ****.

✓ Yes, I do as a mother.

The original sentence includes extraneous asterisks and lacks punctuation. The phrase 'as a mother' is acceptable but ambiguous; remove the asterisks and add a comma after 'Yes' for correct punctuation. If the student means 'as a mother, I think so,' a clearer sentence is 'Yes, I do; as a mother, I think so.' Ensure pronoun reference is clear.

× Some are riding bicycles going to office.

✓ Some ride bicycles to go to the office.

The original sentence mixes continuous form with an incomplete structure and omits the article 'the' before 'office.' Change 'are riding' to simple present 'ride' to match the general statement about habits, and use the infinitive 'to go' or rephrase to 'on their way to the office.' Include 'the' before 'office' unless speaking about offices in general. For clearer alternatives: 'Some ride bicycles to the office.' or 'Some people ride bicycles to work.'