Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and accurate with grammar, use a direct topic sentence, avoid hesitation sounds, and give one or two supporting details with linking words. Correct tense and word choice (e.g., 'shy' → 'young', 'four wheel' → 'training wheels' or 'with four wheels'). Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

Exemplo: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child; my grandfather gave it to me as a gift. At first I used training wheels, but after a few weeks I learned to ride without them, which made me feel very proud and confident.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give specific reasons using linking words (for example, 'because', 'however', 'for instance'). Use correct vocabulary ('popular', 'infrastructure', 'bike lanes') and plural/singular agreement. Avoid filler words and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because there is limited cycling infrastructure. For example, there are few bike lanes and the roads are often busy, so many people prefer to drive instead.

× When I was a shy, my grandfather brought me a bike.

✓ When I was shy, my grandfather brought me a bike.

Grammar problem type ID 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). The phrase 'a shy' incorrectly uses an article with the adjective 'shy'; 'shy' should be an adjective describing 'I' without 'a'. Remove the article to form 'When I was shy'. Also the sentence is otherwise correct in past tense, so no tense change is needed.

× I really enjoy that.

✓ I really enjoyed that.

The context is a past memory introduced by 'When I was shy' and 'my grandfather brought me a bike', so the verb should be past tense. Using present 'enjoy' conflicts with the past narrative. Change to 'enjoyed' to maintain consistent past tense.

× I ride it with the four wheel for the first time and umm, it makes me.

✓ I rode it with the training wheels for the first time and, um, it excited me.

Multiple issues: 'ride' should be past tense 'rode' to agree with the past narrative (Problem Type 5 Past tense issue). 'the four wheel' is incorrect noun phrase—use 'training wheels' or 'four wheels' depending on meaning; 'training wheels' is idiomatic for a child's bike. 'it makes me' is incomplete and ungrammatical; replace with a clear past reaction like 'it excited me'. Overall corrected sentence maintains past tense and clear meaning.

× In my country the bank is not population that much because umm the road have not the lens for the bike and it's not safe for the people who ride a bike, but they try to let people ride a bike.

✓ In my country bicycles are not that popular because the roads do not have lanes for bikes and it's not safe for people who ride a bike, but the government is trying to encourage cycling.

This sentence contains several errors: 'the bank is not population' mixes wrong nouns and word forms—should be 'bicycles are not that popular' (Problem Type 1 Singular and plural issue and 13 adjective/adverb use). 'the road have not the lens' has subject-verb disagreement and wrong nouns—use 'the roads do not have lanes' (Problem Type 27 subject-verb agreement and 11 incorrect prepositions/nouns). 'they try to let people ride a bike' is vague; clarify subject and use 'the government is trying to encourage cycling' to make meaning clear and keep tense consistent. Ensure plural 'roads' and 'lanes' and proper verb forms.