Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise, use correct tense and sentence structure, and provide specific supporting details with linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence (past simple), correct verb forms (got, were), and add one or two specific details about the learning experience using linking phrases (for example, after a few tries; because I was nervous). Avoid filler words and repetition.

Exemplo: Yes — I got my first bike from my parents when I was ten. For example, they taught me in the park and held the seat at first, and after a few tries I managed to balance on my own. Because I was nervous, my father ran alongside me until I felt confident.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion with correct grammar and specific reasons or examples. Use present simple for general statements, correct subject-verb agreement (bikes are), and avoid repeating words. Mention one or two concrete reasons and link them with connectors (because, for example, due to). Finish your thought fully.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because shared electric bikes are widely available. For example, services like Hello Bike and Mobike allow people to rent a bike cheaply for short trips, which makes cycling convenient for commuting and running errands.

× Yes, of course, maybe when I was 10 years old, I get a bike from my parent.

✓ Yes, of course, maybe when I was 10 years old, I got a bike from my parent.

The speaker refers to a past event ('when I was 10 years old'), so the verb should be in the simple past ('got') rather than present tense ('get'). Also 'parent' likely needs plural depending on context but this correction focuses on the tense per instructions. Suggestion: use simple past for completed actions in the past (I got).

× Uh, there is such interesting among the process when I, uh, when my parents teach me how to, how to ride a bike, uh, when they teach.

✓ It was very interesting during the process when my parents taught me how to ride a bike.

The original sentence has awkward structure and incorrect verb tense. 'There is such interesting among the process' is ungrammatical. For a past event use 'It was very interesting' and 'during the process' or 'while' to link clauses. 'Teach' should be past ('taught') to agree with the past timeframe. Suggestion: simplify the sentence and use past tense and natural connectors ('It was... during the process when my parents taught me how to ride a bike').

× Yes, of course the bikes now is very popular among among our society 'cause we have some uh charging charging bikes like hello bike or my twin bike uh.

✓ Yes, of course, bikes are very popular in our society now because we have some shared bikes like Hello Bike or Mobike.

The subject 'bikes' is plural, so the verb must be 'are' not 'is' (subject-verb agreement). 'Among our society' is incorrect — use 'in our society' or 'among people in our society'. 'Charging charging bikes' is unclear; likely meant 'shared bikes' or 'bike-sharing services'. Proper nouns should be capitalized and corrected if needed. Suggestion: use 'bikes are', 'in our society', and replace repetitive or unclear phrases with standard terms ('shared bikes').

× We can put the money for just a little and we can for a.

✓ We can pay a small amount of money to use them.

The original fragment is ungrammatical and incomplete ('we can for a' has no object or verb). 'Put the money for just a little' is awkward; use 'pay a small amount' or 'pay a little' and include the purpose ('to use them'). Suggestion: express the idea with a complete clause: 'We can pay a small amount to use them.'