Challenges— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Reduce hesitations and avoid repeating the same idea.

Exemplo: I find physics the most challenging subject. Firstly, it involves many calculation formulas which require strong math skills; since I'm not confident in mathematics, I often struggle with physics. For example, solving mechanics problems usually takes me a long time.

Sugestão: Answer directly and add a concrete short example. Use linking words such as 'especially' or 'for example' but avoid filler words and finish the sentence properly.

Exemplo: Yes, I like to challenge myself, especially at work. For example, when I receive a new task I've never done before, I learn the necessary skills and try different approaches until I complete it successfully.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first, then explain reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical slips ('simple life' not 'be very simple life'), and provide one concrete example of how you'd handle challenges.

Exemplo: I prefer a simple life with fewer challenges because it reduces stress. However, when challenges appear, I work hard and research solutions; for instance, when my project faced obstacles, I consulted colleagues and studied best practices to solve them.

Sugestão: Structure your answer: state your main strategy, explain steps with linking words (firstly, then), and finish the thought. Reduce hesitation and avoid repeating 'try'. Provide a brief concrete example.

Exemplo: I usually plan ahead to anticipate problems. First, I list potential issues and prepare solutions; then I allocate extra time for important tasks. For example, before a busy week I create a contingency plan so I can handle unexpected events without panic.

× I find physics is, uh, very challenging, uh, so lots of calculation formulas and a lot to remember.

✓ I find physics very challenging because there are lots of formulas to calculate and a lot to remember.

The original sentence combines two clause structures awkwardly ('I find physics is' is redundant). This is a sentence structure error (type 26). Use 'I find physics very challenging' and connect the reason with 'because'. Also use 'formulas to calculate' or simply 'formulas' for clarity.

× And I'm not too good at mathematics, so I find physics very hard, uh, to.

✓ And I'm not very good at mathematics, so I find physics very hard too.

The final 'to' is a misused particle; the correct word is 'too' meaning 'also'. This is an incorrect pronoun/word usage (closest category: 12). Replace 'to' with 'too' and use 'very' instead of 'not too good' for natural phrasing.

× Well, I, I would like to challenge myself yes, especially at work when I have, uh, when I have new tasks and it's something I've never done before.

✓ Well, I would like to challenge myself, especially at work when I have new tasks and when they are things I've never done before.

The sentence is repetitive and awkward ('when I have' repeated and 'it's something I've never done before' is vague). This is a sentence structure error (26). Remove fillers and repeat 'when' correctly; change 'it's something' to 'they are things' to agree with plural 'new tasks'.

× So I take it as a challenge and try my best to.

✓ So I take them as challenges and try my best.

The original ends with dangling 'to' and mismatches singular/plural. This is a sentence structure error (26). Use 'them' to refer to 'new tasks' and 'challenges' plural; finish the clause 'try my best' without 'to'.

× Well, I, I'll just, uh, I'd like to be very simple life with less challenges, but if challenges come in the way, I want to overcome it.

✓ I'd like to live a very simple life with fewer challenges, but if challenges come my way, I want to overcome them.

Several issues: 'be very simple life' is ungrammatical; use 'live a very simple life'. 'Less challenges' should be 'fewer challenges' (count noun), and 'overcome it' mismatches plural 'challenges' — use 'them'. This matches incorrect adjective/adverb and quantifier use (13 and 14); primary fix presented here addresses word choice and agreement.

× I want to work hard and, uh, research, uh, hard work to achieve the, overcome the challenges.

✓ I want to work hard and do research to overcome the challenges.

The original repeats 'hard work' and has an extra article and comma ('the, overcome'). This is a sentence structure error (26). Use 'do research' and a simple infinitive 'to overcome the challenges' for clarity.

× Well, I try to foresee, uh, challenges in my daily life.

✓ Well, I try to foresee challenges in my daily life.

This sentence is mostly fine but contains filler 'uh'. Removing filler improves fluency. 'Foresee challenges in my daily life' is correct; no preposition change needed. Marked here as minor preposition/fluency remark (11).

× I try to plan ahead and try to be ready to take any challenges I may face.

✓ I try to plan ahead and be ready to face any challenges I may encounter.

The phrase 'ready to take any challenges' is awkward; use 'ready to face' or 'ready to take on' and 'encounter' is more natural than repeating 'face'. This is a sentence structure/style issue (26). Simplify by removing redundant 'try' and use 'take on' or 'face'.

× But sometimes it's unexpected things happens and I try to.

✓ But sometimes unexpected things happen, and I try to deal with them.

Original has subject-verb agreement error ('things happens') and ends with dangling 'I try to'. This is both subject-verb agreement (27) and sentence structure error (26). Correct to plural verb 'happen' and complete the idea with 'deal with them'.