Plants— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I keep many plants at home), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, so). Avoid repetition and incorrect collocations (e.g. ‘noisy pollution’, ‘clear airway’). Focus on accurate grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and simpler correct vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes, I keep several plants at home. I have a few potted plants because they improve indoor air quality and make the rooms feel more comfortable. For example, my snake plant absorbs pollutants, so it helps us breathe cleaner air.

Sugestão: Respond with a clear past tense sentence and give one or two specific details. Use correct verb forms (I grew, not I grow) and clearer descriptions (e.g., ‘makes the room feel pleasant’, ‘reduces carbon dioxide’). Avoid unclear phrases like ‘air feel pressure’ and ‘consists of air that is free’. Use linking words (and, because) to connect ideas.

Exemplo: When I was young, I grew a snake plant and a spider plant. I liked the snake plant because it is low-maintenance and makes the room feel fresher, and the spider plant helped reduce dust and improve air quality.

Sugestão: Give a structured answer: start with a topic sentence about what you know, then list two or three clear points with brief explanations. Use correct word forms and avoid repetition. Replace vague phrases (‘help the arise to interact’) with concrete ideas (improve air quality, reduce heat). Use linking words like ‘firstly’, ‘also’, ‘because’.

Exemplo: Yes, I know a little about growing plants. Firstly, plants improve air quality by absorbing carbon dioxide and releasing oxygen. Secondly, they can cool the environment and make homes more comfortable, which is important given global warming and deforestation.

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid overgeneralization. Start with a clear opinion (Yes/No/Some do) and give one cultural reason or example. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and avoid confusing explanations about pollution—focus on why plants are symbolic gifts (luck, health, decoration).

Exemplo: Yes, some Chinese people do give plants as gifts. Plants are often given to wish someone good luck or health, and they are popular as housewarming presents because they brighten the home and symbolize growth.

× Yes, definitely there are lots of plants in my house because it is a kind of activity because more of the most of the plants are give us clear air as well as due to noisy pollution there is a more carbon dioxide than the oxygen.

✓ Yes, definitely there are lots of plants in my house because they provide us with clean air; due to noise and other pollution, there is now more carbon dioxide than oxygen.

The original contains incorrect and awkward uses of 'there is' and plural agreement. 'There are lots of plants' is correct, but phrases like 'it is a kind of activity' and 'more of the most of the plants are give us' are ungrammatical. I corrected the existential phrase and rephrased to show cause and effect clearly. Suggestion: use 'there is/are' for existence correctly and restructure sentences to express reasons (use clauses like 'because' or 'due to').

× In my young age I grow a plant that is snake plant because it is a plant with which which helps to air feel pressure and the space are more pleasant and apart from this a spider plant in my living room.

✓ When I was young I grew a snake plant because it helps purify the air and makes the space more pleasant; I also had a spider plant in my living room.

The sentence needed past tense (grew) and correct past-participial structures. 'In my young age' should be 'When I was young.' 'Grow' in past is 'grew.' Redundant words and incorrect noun phrases were fixed. Suggestion: use simple past for completed actions in the past and remove duplicated words ('which which').

× It consists of air that is free and moisture free to reduce the carbon dioxide.

✓ It helps keep the air clean and reduces moisture and carbon dioxide.

'It consists of air that is free' is incorrect article and verb usage. Use active verb 'helps keep' and correct noun phrases 'carbon dioxide' without 'the' in this context. Suggestion: prefer clear subject-verb phrases and avoid unnecessary articles before uncountable nouns when speaking generally.

× Growing up plant has a lot of advantages.

✓ Growing plants has many advantages.

'Growing up plant' is ungrammatical. Use the gerund 'growing plants' or 'growing a plant' and keep present tense for general truths. Suggestion: use gerund + plural noun to describe general activities and results.

× First of all they give us clear air and apart from this the greenery help the arise to interact very much and apart from this they also give us a comfortable and cool environment.

✓ First of all, they give us clean air; besides, greenery helps people relax and also provides a comfortable, cool environment.

Pronoun and subject issues: 'the greenery help the arise to interact' is unclear and incorrect. I replaced with 'greenery helps people relax' which uses correct subject-verb agreement and an appropriate pronoun. Suggestion: ensure pronouns refer clearly to nouns and match singular/plural verbs.

× Due to nowadays due to global warming the and deforestation all all the plants are cut so they are made.

✓ Nowadays, because of global warming and deforestation, many trees and plants are being cut down.

The original is repetitive and ungrammatical ('due to nowadays due to', 'the and deforestation', 'all all the plants are cut so they are made'). I restructured to a clear passive progressive 'are being cut down' to describe ongoing action. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use correct connectors ('because of'), and standard passive form for ongoing actions.

× Obviously, Chinese people give plants as a gift because they think that it is a kind of important gift for all the individuals to know because all of the time the persons are busy and they extract more, inhale more carbon dioxide and less oxygen due to the environment.

✓ Obviously, Chinese people often give plants as gifts because they consider them meaningful; many people are busy and are exposed to more carbon dioxide and less oxygen due to environmental factors.

The sentence misuses verbs like 'extract' and awkward phrasing 'a kind of important gift for all the individuals to know.' I used 'often' and 'consider' to express tendency and corrected exposure wording. Suggestion: use appropriate verbs for exposure (exposed to) and avoid literal verbs like 'extract' when describing breathing; simplify clauses to express cause and effect.