Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence stating your job, then add one brief, specific detail. Avoid awkward phrases like "college home" and repetitive clauses. Use correct grammar (e.g., "I work as a cashier in my college cafeteria") and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I work as a cashier in my college cafeteria. I handle payments for items such as coffee, tea and desserts, and I usually work about five hours a day during term time.

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct vocabulary and grammar. Give a clear topic sentence naming the place, then one or two specific details (what is sold, your location). Avoid unclear words like "question" and contradictory statements. Use linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: I work in the college cafeteria on campus. It mainly sells snacks and drinks, including items like samosas and frozen treats, and it is located near the library.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer: give a clear reason in one sentence, then support with one or two specific benefits. Correct unclear phrases (e.g., "save my money for the comments" is unclear). Use linking words like "because" and "so" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a good place to work because it's on the same campus where I study, so it's convenient. Also, working there helps me save money for my tuition and other expenses.

Gợi ý: Make the response natural and correct grammar. Start with a direct answer, then give specific reasons using past and present tenses correctly. Avoid filler words like "uh" and incorrect forms like "have get". Use linking words such as "although" or "because."

Ví dụ: Yes, I like working there. Although it can be busy at times, I have learned a lot about different drinks and frozen snacks, and I know their names now.

Gợi ý: Answer with a clear topic sentence about your plan, then give specific steps or reasons. Use correct grammar and logical linking (e.g., "because" or "so"). Be specific about timeline or actions you will take to achieve the plan.

Ví dụ: In the future I plan to open a small restaurant or café. I hope to use the experience I gain in the cafeteria to design the menu and run the business, because there is steady demand for drinks and snacks on campus.

× I am working in a college home as a cashier.

✓ I work at my college as a cashier.

Original sentence uses awkward phrase 'college home' and progressive tense 'am working' which is unnecessary for a regular job. Use simple present 'work' for habitual actions and 'at my college' for correct location expression.

× I collect the cash from the person who purchased the things for me.

✓ I collect cash from the people who buy items for me.

The phrase 'the person who purchased the things for me' is wordy and mixes past tense 'purchased' with a habitual action. Use simple present 'buy' for habitual actions and plural 'people' and 'items' for natural expression.

× For example, they purchased the coffee, green tea, desserts, and so on.

✓ For example, they buy coffee, green tea, desserts, and so on.

Again, habitual context needs simple present 'buy' not past 'purchased'. Also omit the definite article 'the' before general items like 'coffee' unless referring to specific items.

× I work as a question in a college cafeteria in which only the on frozen products are available and drinks.

✓ I work as a cashier in a college cafeteria that sells mostly frozen products and drinks.

Original has 'work as a question' (wrong word) and extra words like 'on'. Replace with correct noun 'cashier', use 'that sells' for defining clause, and 'mostly' to indicate limited variety.

× Drinks are also, for example samosas.

✓ We also sell snacks, for example samosas, and drinks.

Original mixes categories (drinks and samosas) incorrectly. Clarify that samosas are snacks, not drinks, and show correct word order and comma usage.

× Yes, it is a good place to work because I go in the same college, I studied in the same college, I work at that place and it's easy for me to handle both the things at the time and save my money for the comments.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to work because I attend the same college, I studied here, I work there, and it is easy for me to manage both things and save money for my commitments.

Multiple issues: use consistent verbs ('attend' or 'go to'), use 'there' for location consistency, 'handle both the things at the time' is awkward — use 'manage both things'; 'comments' seems wrong contextually — 'commitments' fits. Keep tenses consistent.

× Yes, I would like the place where I work.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work.

Using 'would like' suggests hypothetical desire; simple present 'like' correctly expresses current preference.

× It is quite uh busy sometimes, but I have get knowledge regarding the frozen products and drinks.

✓ It is quite busy sometimes, but I have gained knowledge about the frozen products and drinks.

'Have get' is incorrect; use present perfect 'have gained' to show acquired knowledge. Also 'regarding' can be replaced with 'about' for naturalness.

× Before this I will not know the names of all drinks.

✓ Before this, I did not know the names of all the drinks.

Original mixes future 'will' with past context. Use simple past 'did not know' for a past state. Add 'the' before 'drinks' when referring to a specific set.

× My future work plans to set up a one restaurant business, industrial and business.

✓ My future plan is to set up a restaurant business.

Original is ungrammatical and repetitive ('industrial and business'). Use singular 'plan' and a clear phrase 'set up a restaurant business'.

× I want to take some knowledge from the cafeteria and future that business is successful because everybody wants drinks.

✓ I want to learn from the cafeteria experience and hope the business will be successful because everyone wants drinks.

Original mixes noun forms and tenses awkwardly. Use 'learn from the cafeteria experience' and 'hope the business will be successful' with 'everyone' instead of 'everybody wants drinks' phrased clearly.