Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and directly state your status first (topic sentence), then add one clear supporting detail. Avoid unnecessary words like "personally" and long school names unless relevant. Use linking words if you add extra information.

Ví dụ: I have just finished my senior secondary studies in the medical stream, and at the moment I am taking English classes to improve my language skills.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer and give a specific reason. Correct grammar: say "I don't work" or "I am not working" and use "focusing on my academic studies". Keep it to one or two sentences.

Ví dụ: I am not working at the moment. I am focusing on my academic studies and preparing for further training in healthcare.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly (e.g. "I can't say because I don't work there") then explain briefly. Avoid filler words like "uh" and repeat information. Use linking words like "however" or "because" for clarity.

Ví dụ: I can't say for sure because I don't currently work, however my English classes are a good learning environment because the teachers give helpful feedback and practical practice.

Gợi ý: Be concise: answer directly and give one or two specific reasons. Avoid repetitive phrases like "definitely" and conditional clutter. Use a simple conditional structure correctly: "If I work in the future, I would like..."

Ví dụ: Yes. If I work in the future, I would like a workplace where I feel comfortable and safe, with supportive colleagues and clear training opportunities.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence stating your plan, then one specific detail about timing or steps. Remove fillers like "uh" and correct tense: "I have decided to become" or "I plan to work as". Mention a concrete next step (e.g. study, registration).

Ví dụ: I plan to become a registered nurse and work in Australia. To achieve this, I will complete nursing training and apply for the Australian registration and relevant work visas.

× Recently, I have completed my senior secondary education in the medical stream from Apex International School and currently I'm personally in my English classes.

✓ Recently, I completed my senior secondary education in the medical stream at Apex International School, and currently I am attending English classes.

The sentence mixes present perfect with an ongoing present situation and contains awkward phrasing. 'Recently, I completed' (simple past) is more natural for a finished action with a recent time expression. Use 'at' for institutions. 'I'm personally in my English classes' is unidiomatic; use 'I am attending English classes.' Remove 'personally' unless emphasizing a contrast.

× Right now I don't work anywhere because I have been focused in my academic skill now.

✓ Right now I don't work anywhere because I am focusing on my academic studies.

The original uses present perfect continuous ('have been focused') awkwardly and 'academic skill' is incorrect; use 'academic studies.' Use present continuous 'I am focusing' for a current ongoing emphasis. Remove redundant 'now.' 'Anywhere' is acceptable but 'do not work' + reason needs present continuous.

× As I told you, I do not work now uh, but I have been pursuing my English classes to improve my English skills and it is a good place where I can learn.

✓ As I told you, I do not work now, but I am taking English classes to improve my English skills, and it is a good place for learning.

Use present continuous 'I am taking' rather than 'have been pursuing' which is awkward with 'classes.' 'Pursuing my English classes' is unnatural; 'taking English classes' or 'attending English classes' is correct. 'A good place where I can learn' can be streamlined to 'a good place for learning.'

× Yes, definitely, if I will work in a future, I will definitely love the place where I would work and that will be my comfort place as I will be working where I feel comfortable and safe.

✓ Yes, definitely. If I work in the future, I will definitely like the place where I work, and it will be my place of comfort because I will work where I feel comfortable and safe.

English does not use 'will' in the if-clause of a real conditional; use present simple 'if I work.' Avoid mixing 'will' and 'would' in the same sentence unless expressing hypotheticality. Use 'like' instead of 'love' if you mean prefer; both are possible but 'like' is more neutral. 'Comfort place' is incorrect; use 'place of comfort' or 'comfortable place.'

× As I told you, I have studied in medical stream, so I have been uh decided to work in a medical stream uh as a registered nurse in the future in Australia.

✓ As I told you, I studied in the medical stream, so I have decided to work in the medical field as a registered nurse in Australia in the future.

'Have studied' is acceptable but 'I studied' (simple past) is clearer for completed education. 'I have been decided' is incorrect passive/continuous; use 'I have decided' (present perfect) to show a decision made. Use 'medical field' rather than 'medical stream' in natural English. Place 'in Australia' before 'in the future' or end with 'in the future' for clarity.