Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence giving the location, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect or unclear words (e.g. "which is which", "momentary architecture"). Use linking words if you add details.

Ví dụ: My hometown is Kurtaspur, a small town in the Nazran area of Punjab, India. It has several historic buildings and a few modern structures, and people are very friendly and supportive.

Gợi ý: Answer directly: begin with one clear preference (e.g. peaceful atmosphere), then give a specific reason or example. Avoid repeating location and fix unclear phrasing. Use a linking word like "because" or "for example".

Ví dụ: I like the peaceful atmosphere in my hometown because there is little traffic and neighbours often help each other. For example, people regularly organize community events and support families in need.

Gợi ý: Give a clear time frame and relevant details: start with "I lived there until..." or "I've lived there for..." Then briefly explain what changed (e.g. moved for studies). Keep sentences accurate and avoid irrelevant or contradictory statements (you cannot study BDS during childhood).

Ví dụ: I lived in Kurtaspur until I was 17, when I moved to Ludhiana to study for a Bachelor of Dental Surgery. Since then I have been living in Ludhiana for my studies.

Gợi ý: Give a balanced opinion with one clear statement and two specific reasons: start with "Yes, but..." or "It has both advantages and disadvantages." Mention concrete examples (lack of shops, limited leisure spaces) and finish with a short conclusion.

Ví dụ: It can be a good place for young people because it is peaceful and safe; however, it has limited amenities. For example, there are few shops and no proper recreational spaces, so young people may need to travel to nearby cities for entertainment.

× My hometown is Kurtaspur which is situated in the Nazran part of Punjab, India.

✓ My hometown is Kurtaspur, which is situated in the Nazran part of Punjab, India.

A comma is needed before the non-restrictive relative clause 'which is situated...' to separate it from the main clause. This is punctuation rather than a preposition issue, but it affects sentence clarity; add the comma to improve grammar and readability.

× It is a small city which is which has historical as well as momentary architecture in it.

✓ It is a small city which has historical as well as modern architecture.

The sentence contains repetition ('which is which has') and uses 'momentary' incorrectly; 'modern' is the correct adjective for recent architectural style. Remove the repeated phrase and replace 'momentary' with 'modern' to convey the intended meaning.

× There are friendly people who help each other whenever anyone is in.

✓ There are friendly people who help each other whenever anyone is in need.

The phrase 'in' is incomplete; the correct collocation is 'in need'. Add 'need' to complete the idiom and correct the sentence structure.

× It is a small city situated in the Nadiran part of the Punjab, India.

✓ It is a small city situated in the Nazran part of Punjab, India.

The place name should be consistent ('Nazran' previously used). Also, when mentioning states and countries, use 'Punjab, India' without 'the' before Punjab. Ensure proper nouns and prepositional usage are correct.

× But it is quite peaceful and people are friendly and they help each other whenever there is anyone in need which I didn't realize in the people I'm living.

✓ But it is quite peaceful, and people are friendly; they help each other whenever anyone is in need, which I didn't realize about the people I lived with.

Pronoun and preposition usage is unclear: 'which I didn't realize in the people I'm living' is ungrammatical. Use 'which I didn't realize about the people I lived with' to express discovery about residents. Also fix tense consistency ('I'm living' -> 'I lived with' if referring to past experience). Add punctuation to separate clauses for clarity.

× There was since my childhood till 17.

✓ I lived there from my childhood until I was 17.

'There was' is incorrect for expressing duration of residence. Use 'I lived there from... until...' to indicate how long the person lived in a place. Also specify 'I was 17' for clarity.

× After that I went to Ludhiana for my further studies.

✓ After that, I went to Ludhiana for my further studies.

Add a comma after the introductory phrase for readability. The tense is correct (past) for a completed action; this suggestion improves punctuation.

× I pursued a degree of Bachelors of Dental Surgery in Ludhiana during my childhood.

✓ I pursued a Bachelor of Dental Surgery degree in Ludhiana.

Use the correct degree name and article: 'Bachelor of Dental Surgery' (singular) or 'a Bachelor of Dental Surgery degree'. Also 'during my childhood' is unlikely if studies occurred after school; if meant earlier, keep tense but typically higher education follows childhood—clarify timeframe. The correction fixes article and noun form.

× I love playing in the park area near my.

✓ I love playing in the park near my house.

The sentence is incomplete: 'near my' lacks a noun. Add 'house' to complete the phrase and make a full sentence with a clear object.

× Yes or no It is a quite peaceful place for nurturing the children's, but there are some disadvantages also, there is no departmental stores nearby to buy the products and there is no spaces for.

✓ Yes. It is a quite peaceful place for raising children, but there are some disadvantages: there are no departmental stores nearby to buy necessities, and there are no open spaces.

Multiple errors: 'Yes or no' is confusing—use 'Yes.' 'nurturing the children's' is incorrect; 'raising children' conveys the meaning. 'the children's' is possessive and wrong here. 'There is no departmental stores' has subject-verb agreement and article errors; use 'there are no departmental stores'. 'to buy the products' is vague—'necessities' is better. 'there is no spaces for' is incomplete and mismatches number; use 'there are no open spaces' to complete the thought and fix agreement.