Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two brief supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases like "I do enjoy your reading." and replace with precise expressions (e.g., "I enjoy reading other people's work").

Ví dụ: Not really — I do try to write stories and poems, but I often feel I lack original ideas. However, I enjoy reading other people's writing, which sometimes inspires me.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and combine short fragments into full, linked sentences. Use linking words (because, so, which) and correct names/spellings (Sylvia Plath). Provide a specific reason and a short example of what you express in poetry.

Ví dụ: I mainly write poems because they let me express complex emotions clearly. For example, when I'm feeling nostalgic or confused, writing a poem helps me explore those feelings and organize my thoughts.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer (Yes/No) and then explain briefly with clear linking words. Use simpler, accurate vocabulary (experience, maturity, change) and avoid redundant phrases. Give one concrete way your writing might change.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think my writing will change as I gain experience and maturity. For instance, I expect my themes will become more reflective and my language more precise as I grow older.

Gợi ý: This answer is quite good — keep it concise and correct small repetitions. Use one linking word to contrast the two preferences and give a brief reason for each preference, as you did.

Ví dụ: It depends: I prefer typing for homework because it's faster and easy to edit, but I prefer handwriting for poems or stories because it helps me connect emotionally with the text.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct grammar and word choice (diary, kept). Use linking words to contrast past and present and give a specific frequency or example of what you record now.

Ví dụ: I don't keep a diary regularly. I used to when I was about ten and wrote every day, but now I only note important events or thoughts in my phone's Notes app.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and list methods with brief reasons. Correct word choice and grammar (in the past, Notes app, save pictures, nostalgic reasons). Use linking words like "and" or "for" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I mostly use my phone to record my life: I keep notes in a Notes app, take photos, and sometimes record short videos to capture moments for nostalgic reasons.

× I try to write stories and poems but I'm not creative enough to come up with my original ideas. But I do enjoy your reading. Other people's writings.

✓ I try to write stories and poems, but I'm not creative enough to come up with my own ideas. However, I do enjoy reading other people's writings.

Error: 'your reading' is incorrect; the student meant 'reading' as a noun plus the object 'other people's writings'. Also 'my original ideas' is odd; 'my own ideas' is the correct collocation. Suggestion: use 'reading' without 'your', and replace 'original' with 'own' for natural English.

× I mostly like to write poems because I find poems very interesting and it can help me express. Things that cannot be expressed into words. My favorite poem is Sylvia Path.

✓ I mostly like to write poems because I find them very interesting and they help me express things that cannot be put into words. My favorite poet is Sylvia Plath.

Errors: inconsistent reference to 'poems' (use pronoun 'them') and wrong verb agreement ('it can help' should be 'they help'). Sentence fragments: 'Things that...' should be part of the previous sentence. Also 'express into words' is incorrect collocation; use 'put into words'. 'Sylvia Path' is misspelt and 'poem' vs 'poet' confusion: likely the student meant poet Sylvia Plath. Suggestion: combine fragments, ensure pronoun agreement, correct collocation and proper name spelling.

× Well, of course, as my experience and maturity senses according to time and circumstances, the things I write with obviously sense and I would write according to the situation, like I'm adapting to it, so there isn't a constant feeling it's ever changing.

✓ Well, of course, as my experience and maturity change over time and with circumstances, the things I write make more sense and I write according to the situation; I'm adapting to it, so there is no constant feeling — it's always changing.

Errors: awkward tense and word choices ('maturity senses' incorrect), word order and subject-verb agreement. 'the things I write with obviously sense' is ungrammatical; use 'make more sense'. 'there isn't a constant feeling it's ever changing' confused negatives; better: 'there is no constant feeling — it's always changing.' Suggestion: simplify clauses, use correct verbs ('change over time'), and clear connectors.

× It depends on the situation. If I'm doing doing my homework or assignments then I would prefer prefer typing because it's fast and I can erase my mistakes and redo it. Or if I'm writing some stories or poems then I would prefer writing by hand because it helps me express and feel and evoke my emotions.

✓ It depends on the situation. If I'm doing my homework or assignments, I prefer typing because it's faster and I can erase my mistakes and redo them. If I'm writing stories or poems, I prefer writing by hand because it helps me express, feel, and evoke my emotions.

Errors: duplicated words 'doing doing' and 'prefer prefer'; pronoun/verb agreement 'redo it' should match plural 'mistakes' -> 'redo them'; comparative 'fast' -> 'faster' comparing two methods. Suggestion: remove duplicates, use comparative form when comparing, and ensure pronouns agree with their antecedents.

× I don't usually keep dairy, the last time I keep dairy when I was really young, about 10 years old, where I wrote everything I did whole day. But now at the present I just use my notes app in the phone to keep the important stops.

✓ I don't usually keep a diary; the last time I kept a diary was when I was very young, about ten years old, when I wrote everything I did during the whole day. But now I use the Notes app on my phone to record important things.

Errors: 'dairy' (food product) vs 'diary' (journal) wrong word choice and article usage ('a diary'). Tense: 'keep' should be past 'kept'. Awkward phrase 'where I wrote' -> 'when I wrote'; 'whole day' -> 'during the whole day'. 'notes app in the phone' -> 'Notes app on my phone'. 'important stops' is incorrect; likely 'important stuff' or 'things'. Suggestion: correct vocabulary, use past tense for past habits, and use appropriate prepositions and articles.

× Well I used to record my life in the diary at past but now I use my notesafe on the phone or I just record a video or save a pictures for nostalgic reason.

✓ Well, I used to record my life in a diary in the past, but now I use a notes app on my phone, or I just record a video or save pictures for nostalgic reasons.

Errors: redundant 'at past' -> 'in the past'; 'the diary' -> 'a diary'; 'notesafe' unclear — likely 'notes app'; article 'a pictures' incorrect -> 'pictures'; 'nostalgic reason' -> plural 'nostalgic reasons'. Suggestion: use correct past expression 'used to' with 'in the past', correct app name 'Notes app', and ensure noun plurality and articles are correct.