Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer shows passion but is unclear and has grammar errors and some redundancy. Keep it concise (max 4–5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I enjoy singing) then give 2 short supporting reasons with specific examples. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' correctly, and correct tense/word choice (e.g. 'improves' not 'more reversing').

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and lifts my mood. For example, after a stressful day I sing for 10–15 minutes to calm myself. Also, practicing every day has improved my voice and confidence.

Gợi ý: The idea is fine but grammar and clarity need work. Use correct tense (I tried / I have tried), and give a specific example of what you learned from tutorials. Keep it to 2–4 sentences and use linking words like 'also' or 'in addition'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have tried to learn singing by watching tutorial videos on YouTube. For instance, I practised breathing and pitch exercises from a vocal coach’s videos. In addition, I watch live concerts to study singers’ stage confidence.

Gợi ý: Good personal answer but make it more natural and grammatically correct. State the main idea first then add a brief reason and an example. Use connecting phrases like 'because' and 'for example', and avoid trailing phrases like 'by'.

Ví dụ: In the future I would like to sing for my husband because singing is a meaningful way to show my love. For example, I might sing a favourite song of his at our anniversary to make the moment special.

Gợi ý: The answer agrees but has unclear phrases and an unfinished thought. Begin with a clear statement, then give 1–2 specific reasons or examples. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for instance', and avoid irrelevant fragments.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can make people happier because listening to calm music reduces stress and boosts energy. For instance, many people feel relaxed and more positive after listening to soothing songs during their commute.

× Yes I like something because singing is very good thing which can relax your mind and body more reversing you use the blessing of God and you can do more better by practicing everyday.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it is a very good activity that can relax your mind and body; with God's blessing and daily practice, you can improve a lot.

The original sentence has incorrect and missing articles ('a very good thing' -> 'a very good activity'), incorrect word forms ('something' is vague; 'more reversing you use' is unclear), and comparative form error ('more better' is incorrect). Also punctuation and sentence structure are weak. Suggest using clear noun ('singing'), correct article usage, avoid double comparatives, and split into clearer clauses. Use: 'a' before singular countable noun, avoid 'more better' (use 'much better' or 'improve a lot'), and place modifiers close to the words they modify.

× At first I didn't like singing but by practicing I do.

✓ At first I didn't like singing, but after practising I did.

The sentence mixes past ('didn't like') with present ('I do'); since the speaker refers to a past change, both verbs should be in past tense. Also use 'after practising' to show the cause. In British English 'practising' spelling is suggested. Ensure tense consistency.

× Yes, once I try to learn to sing by watching some tutorial videos in YouTube.

✓ Yes, once I tried to learn to sing by watching some tutorial videos on YouTube.

The original uses present tense 'try' while referring to a past event; use past simple 'tried'. Also the correct preposition for the platform is 'on YouTube', not 'in YouTube'. 'Once' here implies a past occasion, so past tense is required.

× Moreover, I watch the singers concert and showing their confidence like level of content.

✓ Moreover, I watch singers' concerts and observe their confidence and stage presence.

Problems: verb tense and form ('watch' should be past/present continuous depending on meaning; for habitual present 'I watch' is okay but other parts inconsistent), incorrect possessive ('singers concert' -> 'singers' concerts'), and unclear phrase 'like level of content'. Rephrase to 'observe their confidence and stage presence' for clarity. Ensure noun forms and possessives are correct.

× In future I like to do singing for my husband because I always prefer to feel and show my love by singing something which can be more precious for him and he will recognize my feeling by.

✓ In the future I would like to sing for my husband because I prefer to express my love through song; that would be precious to him and he would recognise my feelings.

Use future intention 'would like to' or 'want to' for politeness. Original has awkward 'do singing' and incorrect word order ('recognize my feeling by'). Use 'express my love through song' for natural English. Keep tense consistency ('would be', 'would recognise'). Also remove trailing preposition and correct singular/plural and article usage.

× Yes, definitely singing can bring happiness too people because when people listen calm and peaceful music, they feel very energetic and they bring happiness in their life.

✓ Yes, definitely singing can bring happiness to people because when people listen to calm and peaceful music, they feel energised and it can bring happiness into their lives.

Errors: 'too people' should be 'to people'; missing preposition 'listen to'; adjective/adverb placement and verb choice ('feel very energetic' -> 'feel energised'); 'bring happiness in their life' should be 'bring happiness into their lives' for idiomatic English and correct plural agreement. Maintain consistent plural 'their lives'.

× Moreover, series of class 14 which.

✓ Moreover, I attended a series of 14 classes which helped me improve.

Original is an incomplete fragment lacking a verb and clear meaning. Add subject and verb to complete the sentence. Clarify 'series of class 14' as 'a series of 14 classes' and explain effect ('which helped me improve'). Ensure sentence completeness.