Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Focus on clarity, relevance and organization. Begin with a clear topic sentence answering the question directly (Yes/No and why), use simple correct sentences, avoid unclear phrases (e.g., 'Hemo braces', 'different color focus'), and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add one specific reason or example linking childhood singing in church to why you liked it and explain briefly why you stopped.

Ví dụ: Yes, I liked singing when I was a child because I sang in my church choir and it made me feel connected to my community. For example, we practiced every week and I enjoyed learning harmonies with other members. However, I focused more on my school studies as I grew older, so I gradually stopped singing regularly.

Gợi ý: Be precise and use appropriate vocabulary. Start with a clear answer, then give concise details about where and how you learned. Replace incorrect words ('addiction', 'seeing a braces') with accurate terms like 'technique', 'harmony' or 'presence'. Use linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so') to connect reasons and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned to sing in my church choir. We practiced regularly to improve our tone and harmony, especially on weekends, because we wanted to lead worship effectively. These regular rehearsals helped me develop confidence and vocal control.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and avoid repetition. State clearly who you sing for (e.g., congregation, visitors) and give one specific detail or reason. Use correct nouns and avoid unclear fragments. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word to add the supporting detail.

Ví dụ: I usually sang for the congregation and for visitors to our church. We wanted to welcome newcomers and support the worship service, so the choir prepared special songs for important services.

Gợi ý: Be concise and give a clear opinion with one reason and a brief personal example. Use natural collocations (e.g., 'bring joy', 'move the audience') and correct grammar. Limit to 2–3 sentences: state your view, give a reason, then add a short personal experience as evidence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring joy to people because a moving performance can lift listeners' spirits. For example, when a choir sang at my school assembly, many students smiled and seemed more relaxed afterwards.

× Abu Gill remembered when I was in my childhood years, I would like to sing in our Hemo braces.

✓ Abu Gill remembered that when I was a child, I liked to sing in our Hemo braces.

The original sentence has awkward clause linking and tense/word choice problems. Use 'remembered that' to introduce a reported memory, 'when I was a child' is the natural phrase, and 'liked' (simple past) matches 'remembered' and past habit. Replace 'would like to sing' (present/future desire) with 'liked to sing' (past habit).

× It's most important in our church.

✓ It was very important in our church.

Context refers to past practices; use past tense 'was' rather than present 'is'. 'Most important' is acceptable but 'very important' is more natural here. This corrects tense mismatch (present participle/form confusion).

× But while I'm growing up, I decided to not to sing because I had a different color focus, most importantly at school than singing at the church service.

✓ But as I grew up, I decided not to sing because I had different priorities, especially at school rather than at church services.

Mixed tenses and incorrect infinitive form 'to not to sing' should be 'decided not to sing'. 'While I'm growing up' mixes present continuous with past 'decided'; change to 'as I grew up'. 'Different color focus' is unclear; replace with 'different priorities'. Preposition and article use adjusted ('at church services').

× Yes, I've learned how to sing in our church service.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing for our church services.

Use simple past 'learned' for a completed past action; 'in our church service' is awkward — 'for our church services' clarifies purpose. Avoid present perfect if specific past time is implied by context.

× I remember that we used to go to the church almost every day to practice our tone as well as our addiction.

✓ I remember that we used to go to church almost every day to practice our tone as well as our diction.

'Addiction' is the wrong word (an incorrect adjective/noun choice). The intended word is likely 'diction' (the clarity of speech/singing). Also remove the article before 'church' for natural usage. 'Practice our tone' is acceptable.

× To provide a good service of seeing a braces to our church service, most importantly every weekend.

✓ We practiced to provide good musical service to our church, especially on weekends.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. Recast as a full clause: 'We practiced to provide good musical service' clarifies intent. 'Seeing a braces' is meaningless and removed. 'Most importantly every weekend' becomes 'especially on weekends' for natural adverbial phrase.

× We normally sang for our choir members and also to our visitors in our church.

✓ We normally sang for our choir members and for visitors to our church.

Pronoun/phrase order and preposition use are slightly off. Use parallel structure: 'for our choir members and for visitors to our church.' Remove redundant 'our' before 'church' for concision.

× I remembered in my childhood years during our church service, we sang him of braces to our visitors as well as to our UH church member in order to provide a a good service.

✓ I remember that during my childhood church services, we sang hymns to our visitors as well as to our church members in order to provide a good service.

Multiple errors: 'I remembered' should be 'I remember' or 'I remembered that' depending on tense consistency; here present 'I remember' fits. 'sang him of braces' is incorrect — intended 'sang hymns'. Remove extraneous 'UH' and duplicate 'a'. Reorder for clarity and use 'church members'.

× In our church.

✓ We did this in our church.

A sentence fragment lacking a verb; integrate with previous sentence or supply a verb. Here, 'We did this in our church' makes it complete and refers back to the action of singing.

× Yes, I agree that singing can give satisfactory and joyful heart to the people who can hear it.

✓ Yes, I agree that singing can give listeners a satisfying and joyful feeling.

Word choice and word form errors: 'satisfactory and joyful heart' is unnatural. Use adjective + noun 'a satisfying and joyful feeling' or 'a joyful heart' but 'listeners' is a clearer subject than 'people who can hear it.'

× Most importantly if the the singer is having a good quality of voice and also it will mesmerize the audience that is makes people happy and I've experienced that kind of feeling when I'm.

✓ Most importantly, if the singer has a good-quality voice and can mesmerize the audience, it makes people happy, and I have experienced that feeling myself.

Multiple tense and grammar issues: 'is having' should be simple present 'has' for general truth. 'Good quality of voice' becomes 'good-quality voice'. Remove redundant 'also'. 'That is makes' is ungrammatical — simplify to 'it makes'. 'I've experienced that kind of feeling when I'm.' is incomplete; change to 'I have experienced that feeling myself.'