Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific details about frequency and reason. Avoid hesitations and unclear words. Use linking words (e.g., because, so) to connect ideas and maintain coherence.

Ví dụ: Not really. I don't buy shoes often; usually I only replace them when they are worn out or broken, which happens about once a year. Because I prefer to spend money on practical items, I wait until shoes are unusable before buying new ones.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give specific details (which site, what you bought, when, and why). Remove filler sounds and use linking words (for example, last week; because; so) to make the answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often buy shoes online. For example, last week I bought a pair of sneakers from Jingdong because they had a good discount and free returns, so I find online shopping convenient and reliable.

Gợi ý: Give a direct estimate or range and explain the reason. Use linking words (for instance, because, therefore) and specific figures rather than vague phrases. Avoid repeating words and ensure the response is natural and concise.

Ví dụ: I usually spend between $30 and $60 on a pair of shoes because I prefer to spend more of my budget on food and essentials. Therefore I tend to choose mid-priced shoes that are durable and practical.

Gợi ý: Good direct answer. To improve, add a brief specific reason or example and use softer phrasing (e.g., "practical person" rather than "realistic man"). Keep it natural and avoid sounding rigid.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I'm a practical person. For example, I usually choose cushioned sneakers for daily walking since they protect my feet and last longer than very fashionable but uncomfortable shoes.

× I have bought 1 shoes uh from Jing Dong which is a very popular online shopping platform in China.

✓ I have bought 1 pair of shoes from Jing Dong, which is a very popular online shopping platform in China.

Using '1 shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is a plural noun and needs a plural number or a unit word. Use '1 pair of shoes' to match singular quantity with a plural noun. Suggestion: say 'one pair of shoes' or 'one shoe' if you truly mean a single shoe.

× I usually buy shoes and then. Mice, uh, broken or worn out so that it might be once or.

✓ I usually buy shoes when my old ones are broken or worn out, so it might only be once in a while.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'And then. Mice,' seems like transcription noise. Rebuild sentence to show cause and frequency: use 'when' to introduce the condition ('old ones are broken or worn out') and a phrase indicating frequency ('once in a while'). Suggestion: remove filler words and connect clauses to form a complete sentence.

× I usually spend real money on shoes or shoes because I prefer spending my money on food.

✓ I usually don't spend much money on shoes because I prefer spending my money on food.

The original repeats 'shoes or shoes' and uses 'real money' awkwardly. Also the intended meaning is that they spend little on shoes, so use 'don't spend much money on shoes.' This fixes word repetition and clarifies quantifier usage. Suggestion: use 'don't spend much' or 'spend little' to express low expenditure.

× Of course, comfortable shoes because I am a realistic man, so that I would choose items which are more practical.

✓ Of course, comfortable shoes, because I am a practical person, so I would choose items that are more practical.

'Realistic man' is awkward; 'practical person' is more natural and gender-neutral. Also replace 'which' with 'that' for defining relative clause and remove unnecessary 'so that.' Suggestion: use clear noun phrases and appropriate relative pronouns.

× Yes, I often buy shoes online. I have bought 1 shoes uh from Jing Dong which is a very popular online shopping platform in China. Uh, last week.

✓ Yes, I often buy shoes online. I bought a pair of shoes from Jing Dong last week; it is a very popular online shopping platform in China.

The fragment 'Uh, last week.' should be integrated into the past tense sentence 'I bought...' Use simple past 'bought' when specifying a past time ('last week'). Also 'I have bought' is less appropriate with a specific past time. Suggestion: use simple past when mentioning a definite past time and combine fragments into one complete sentence.