Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetitions, and use linking words to add one or two specific reasons. Correct verb forms and article use (e.g., "I like buying shoes", "I can walk comfortably"). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I like buying shoes, especially sneakers. I work long shifts in a healthcare facility, so I choose sneakers that are comfortable and supportive. Also, I enjoy different styles and sometimes buy a new pair every few months when I need replacement.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and two specific benefits using linking words (e.g., "because", "also"). Fix grammar ("I buy most of my shoes online", "I can choose from different discounts"). Avoid repeating phrases like "I can able".

Ví dụ: Yes, I buy most of my shoes online because I don't have time to visit stores. Also, online shopping lets me compare prices and find discounts, and I can read reviews to make sure the shoes fit well.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a specific typical range, then explain why using linking words (e.g., "usually", "because"). Correct phrasing ("I usually spend around $100 on a pair of shoes") and avoid vague or repetitive statements.

Ví dụ: I usually spend around $100 on a pair of shoes because I need durable, comfortable footwear for work. This price usually gives me good quality that lasts for several months to a year.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two concise, specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Avoid hesitations and unclear fragments. Correct grammar and reduce repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I work long shifts on my feet, so I need supportive, durable sneakers to avoid muscle strain. I do own a few fashionable pairs for special occasions, but comfort is my priority.

× I'd like buying shoes, most importantly sneakers because I'm fascinated with the styles and since I'm working a healthcare facility I normally select the the best sneakers so I I can able to walk properly since I had a long standing working hours so that's why I like shoes.

✓ I'd like buying shoes -> I'd like to buy shoes. I normally select the best sneakers so I can walk properly because I have long standing working hours.

The phrase 'I'd like buying' incorrectly uses the -ing form after 'would like.' Use the infinitive 'to buy.' 'Can able to' is redundant; use 'can' or 'am able to.' 'I had a long standing working hours' mixes tense and number; use present perfect or simple present and plural: 'I have long standing working hours.' Also remove duplicated 'the' and duplicate 'I'. Suggestions: use 'I'd like to buy shoes, especially sneakers' and 'I normally choose the best sneakers so I can walk properly because I have long standing working hours.' Note: Only changes matching Grammar Problem Type 8 were applied.

× Yes, I bought most of my shoes online because I'm more comfortable buying it instead of going to the store personally since I don't have enough time to to go and shop.

✓ Yes, I have bought most of my shoes online because I'm more comfortable buying them instead of going to the store since I don't have enough time to go shopping.

The original used simple past 'bought' which is acceptable but context (experience up to now) is better with present perfect 'have bought.' 'Buying it' uses singular pronoun for plural 'shoes' — use 'them.' 'to to go and shop' is repetitive; use 'to go shopping.' This addresses past participle/present perfect usage and pronoun agreement (Grammar Problem Type 9 and 12). Only relevant changes per the list were applied.

× But buying shoes online I can also see different discounts and selected items that I can choose. I can able to choose and I'm satisfied with it.

✓ Buying shoes online, I can also see different discounts and selected items that I can choose. I am able to choose and I'm satisfied with them.

'I can able to' is incorrect; use 'I am able to' or simply 'I can.' 'Satisfied with it' uses singular pronoun for plural 'items' or 'shoes' — use 'them.' Also add a comma after the introductory clause. Corrections follow pronoun and verb usage rules (Types 12 and 9/8).

× I normally spend the amount that is good for my budget. For example I spend for at least 100 bucks for a specific items like shoes.

✓ I normally spend an amount that fits my budget. For example, I spend at least 100 bucks on specific items like shoes.

Use 'spend an amount' or 'spend the amount' not 'spend the amount that is good for my budget.' 'Spend for' is incorrect; use 'spend on.' 'A specific items' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'specific items' or 'a specific item.' This addresses present tense phrasing and article/number agreement (Types 6 and 22/1).

× So I can able to use this even though a year or a few months.

✓ So I am able to use these for a year or a few months.

'I can able to' is ungrammatical; use 'I am able to' or 'I can.' 'This' refers to plural 'shoes/items' — use 'these.' 'Even though a year' is incorrect; use 'for a year.' This fixes quantifier and pronoun issues (Types 14 and 12).

× That is good quality as well. But I'm also very satisfied what I bought all the time.

✓ They are good quality as well. I am also very satisfied with what I buy.

'That' is singular while referring to items — use 'They' for shoes. 'Satisfied what I bought' requires preposition 'with' and tense consistency: use present simple 'buy' for habitual purchases. This addresses adjective/adverb and preposition usage (Types 13 and 11).

× I prefer the comfortable shoes because I'm working in a healthcare facility, so wearing sneakers with durable and comfortable shoes all the time I I don't need to strain my muscle to work standing in standing hours.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I work in a healthcare facility, so wearing durable and comfortable sneakers all the time means I don't need to strain my muscles when I have long standing hours.

Use simple present 'I work' instead of 'I'm working' for habitual occupation (Type 2/6). Remove duplicate 'I.' 'Strain my muscle' should be plural 'muscles.' 'In standing hours' is awkward; use 'when I have long standing hours.' Also adjust word order for clarity. This addresses third person/verb form, tense and noun number issues (Types 2, 6, and 1).

× Also passionate, fun, fashionable shoes. I had some few if I had yeah.

✓ I also have some fashionable, fun, and expressive shoes that I wear occasionally.

The original fragments are incomplete and unclear. 'Also passionate, fun, fashionable shoes' lacks a verb; 'I had some few if I had yeah' is ungrammatical and incoherent. Rewrite into a complete sentence stating possession and occasional use. This fixes sentence structure errors (Type 26).