Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your response is somewhat unclear and contains several grammatical errors and irrelevant phrases. Aim to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep sentences concise (max 5). Avoid filler and confusing phrases. For accuracy, practice correct verb forms and clearer references (e.g. “basic shoes” or “casual shoes”).

Ví dụ: I don't buy shoes very often. Currently I only buy new shoes when my old ones wear out, but when I was in college I bought trainers more regularly because I needed them for sports and fashion.

Gợi ý: Good idea communicated but speech is repetitive and has hesitations. Make one clear statement and then add specific reasons with linking words (e.g. because, so). Avoid repeating words and fillers. Also use consistent tense: "I often buy" or "I have bought".

Ví dụ: Yes, I often buy shoes online because they are usually cheaper than in stores, and I know my size so I don't need to try them on. For example, I buy trainers from official websites to get discount offers.

Gợi ý: This answer is relevant and gives specific price ranges, but the delivery has hesitations and informal fillers. Structure your answer: start with a general statement, then give specific ranges for different types with linking words (for example, "for trainers..., for slippers..."). Use precise language and avoid repeating "like".

Ví dụ: It depends on the type of shoe. As a student I spent about 200 RMB on average; now I usually pay at least 500 RMB for trainers for comfort, while slippers typically cost between 100 and 200 RMB.

Gợi ý: You state your preference clearly, but the supporting details are muddled and contain unclear names and repeated filler. Give one clear reason for your preference and one concise example. Use linking words (because, so) and correct vocabulary for colors/brands. Avoid rhetorical questions that confuse meaning.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk a lot and need support. For example, I often buy classic black Adidas trainers because they are durable and comfortable for daily use.

× Right now I don't like buying shoes.

✓ Right now I don't like buying shoes.

No correction needed; sentence uses present tense appropriately to describe a current preference. Included for completeness, but no error found.

× I think as long as I have the basic shoes like where are ladies super hots?

✓ I think as long as I have basic shoes like simple flats or sandals, it's fine.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains unclear fragments ('where are ladies super hots'). This is a sentence structure error (type 26). The correction clarifies the intended meaning and uses a coherent clause. Suggestion: state the category of shoes directly and connect ideas with clear clauses (subject + verb + object).

× I wear clothes every day if I'm not working.

✓ I wear shoes every day if I'm not working.

The original said 'I wear clothes' which is likely a word choice error rather than tense, but treating as present tense/context: use 'shoes' to answer the question about buying shoes. Ensure the present simple is used for habitual actions. Suggestion: use present simple to describe routines (I wear shoes every day).

× But when I was in college I was like buying the Nike, the Adidas, the sports shoes.

✓ But when I was in college I used to buy Nike, Adidas, and other sports shoes.

This is a past tense/usage issue (type 5). 'Was like buying' is informal and incorrect here. Use 'used to buy' to indicate a past habitual action. Also remove articles before brand names and use plural for types of shoes. Suggestion: use 'used to' or simple past for repeated past actions.

× It depends.

✓ It depends.

Correct as is; present simple used appropriately to indicate variability.

× Yeah, sure. I always bought shoes from online online because the price is lower than the shop Shop, you know, also like I, I know my size, so I don't need to like to try the shoes as long as I like the style.

✓ Yeah, sure. I always buy shoes online because the price is lower than in shops. Also, I know my size, so I don't need to try shoes as long as I like the style.

Original mixes past and present inconsistently and has repetition and preposition errors. Use present simple 'always buy' for habitual action (type 6). Preposition 'from online' is incorrect; use 'online' or 'from online stores' and compare with 'in shops' (type 11). Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'need' and duplicate words. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense for habits and use correct prepositions ('online', 'in shops').

× Actually it depends, when I was a student I always like buying shoes like around 200 RMB.

✓ Actually it depends. When I was a student I usually bought shoes costing around 200 RMB.

Sentence contains tense inconsistency and article/pattern issues. Use past habitual 'usually bought' (type 5) for student period. 'Like buying' is informal; use 'bought' and 'costing around' for price. Split into two sentences for clarity (type 22/26). Suggestion: use consistent past tense for past situations and clearer phrasing for price.

× But right now like if it's for the trainers at least 500 so it will be very comfortable.

✓ But right now, if it's for trainers, I spend at least 500 RMB so they will be very comfortable.

Use present simple for current habits (type 6). 'It' should refer to the shoes (plural 'they') or 'I spend' clarifies subject. Ensure agreement between subject and verb and correct pronoun number (type 27). Also include currency unit. Suggestion: use 'I spend' and 'they will' or 'they are' to match plural 'trainers'.

× If it's the slippers then maybe 100 and 200 RMB.

✓ If they are slippers then maybe 100 to 200 RMB.

Use plural pronoun 'they' for slippers and correct range expression '100 to 200 RMB' (type 6 and 27). Avoid 'it's' for plural items. Suggestion: ensure pronoun number matches noun and use proper range wording.

× Well, for me, I'm a simple person.

✓ Well, I'm a simple person.

Original has redundant clause 'for me' with 'I'm'—not strictly incorrect but stylistically redundant. Classified as sentence structure issue (type 26). Suggest simplifying for natural speech.

× I always prefer comfortable shoes.

✓ I always prefer comfortable shoes.

Correct as is; present simple used appropriately to express a general preference.

× Umm also buy like the classic 1, you know, black, pinks, Jenny, she have the shoes Adidas.

✓ I also buy classic colors, like black and pink. Jenny has Adidas shoes.

This sentence is a run-on with unclear references and tense/pronoun errors. 'She have' is incorrect (subject-verb agreement, type 27) and the list of colors and names is unclear. Split into two sentences and correct verb agreement: 'Jenny has'. Suggestion: make separate clear sentences for your purchases and for mentioning Jenny.

× I like that brand.

✓ I like that brand.

Sentence correct; included for completeness. No preposition error found.

× So I bought that and it's also very comfortable.

✓ So I bought them and they're also very comfortable.

If referring to shoes previously mentioned, use plural pronouns. 'So I bought that' is acceptable if referring to a singular item but context implies plural 'shoes' (type 6 and 27). Use 'bought' for past action and match pronouns: 'them' and 'they're'. Suggestion: ensure pronoun number matches the noun being referred to.

× Is it comfortable is the best?

✓ Comfort is the most important thing for me.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. Classified as sentence structure error (type 26). Rephrase to clearly express the idea that comfort is the priority. Suggestion: express the idea with a clear subject and predicate, e.g., 'Comfort is the most important thing.'