Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations and repetitions, and provide one brief supporting reason with a linking word. Aim for 2–3 sentences and choose natural phrasing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do enjoy chatting with friends. I especially like talking about our life experiences when we travel together, but if the conversation is trivial I prefer spending some quiet time alone.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence stating usual topics, use linking words (for example, especially, for instance) and avoid long, single anecdotes. Provide specific details concisely and avoid repetition of the same idea.

Ví dụ: We usually talk about life experiences and how to handle challenges. For example, we often discuss career decisions in Canada, such as finding jobs and adapting to the workplace, because many of us are building our professional lives here.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference in the first sentence, limit hesitations and repetitions, and use linking words to explain reasons. Be specific about what benefits group or one-to-one chats bring.

Ví dụ: It depends, but I generally prefer group conversations because they bring diverse perspectives. For instance, in a group we can share different solutions to challenges and learn from each other's experiences.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly, avoid filler words and repetition, and provide one concise reason with a linking phrase. Use natural vocabulary (genuine, sincere) and correct grammar forms.

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can see someone's genuine interest and body language. In contrast, social media can make it easier for people to hide or fake their true feelings.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear general answer, then briefly describe the incident using past tense and specific concise details. Avoid long confusing sentences and correct grammar (e.g., misunderstandings, we are no longer friends).

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually argue with my friends. However, once at my previous job I had a disagreement with a long-term friend about another colleague, which led to a misunderstanding and we eventually drifted apart.

× Honestly, I love traveling with my friends or to talk about different kind of life experiences if it's meant to be, but if it's uh, really not uh, really that important, I normally want to spend quality time with myself instead of talking with them.

✓ Honestly, I love traveling with my friends or talking about different kinds of life experiences if it's meant to be, but if it's not really that important, I normally prefer to spend quality time by myself instead of talking with them.

Errors: incorrect use of infinitive after 'or' instead of parallel gerund ('to talk' -> 'talking'), 'different kind' requires plural 'kinds' when followed by 'of', awkward word order 'really not uh, really that important' simplified to 'not really that important', 'want to spend quality time with myself' is unnatural; use 'prefer to spend quality time by myself'. Suggestion: keep parallel structures (use gerunds consistently), use plural 'kinds' when generalizing, simplify redundant words, and use natural collocations like 'prefer to spend time by myself'.

× I remember one time that we talk about life experiences and how to deal with different challenges in this life, Especially we talk about professional career that we need to undertake, especially in this country, Canada, and I miss this moment of talk and hopefully it will happen again if we met each other.

✓ I remember one time when we talked about life experiences and how to deal with different challenges in life. Especially, we talked about the professional careers we needed to pursue in this country, Canada, and I miss that conversation and hope it will happen again if we meet each other.

Errors: tense mismatch — 'I remember one time that we talk' should use past tense 'talked' because the memory refers to a past event; 'we need to undertake' should be past 'we needed to pursue' to match context; 'if we met each other' should be present 'if we meet' for a future/conditional hope. Also 'moment of talk' is awkward; use 'conversation' or 'that conversation'. Suggestions: keep past tense for remembered events, use appropriate verbs ('pursue careers'), and choose natural nouns ('conversation').

× I think it depends on the circumstances, but I think it's uh, but I prepared to talk with a group of people. So we share different kinds of views as well as perspective in our life as well as challenges. So they, so there's some people also they can share their point of view or what they are trying to.

✓ I think it depends on the circumstances, but I am prepared to talk with a group of people. We share different kinds of views and perspectives about our lives and challenges. Some people can also share their point of view or what they are trying to say.

Errors: 'I prepared to talk' is incorrect form — use 'I am prepared' or 'I am ready' (present state). 'perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' to match 'views'. Sentence fragments and redundancy ('So they, so there's some people also they') should be simplified. Ending 'what they are trying to.' is incomplete — complete as 'what they are trying to say'. Suggestions: use correct participle/adjective forms for states ('prepared' with auxiliary), match plural nouns, avoid filler words and complete clauses.

× I think I prefer the talking face to face because I will know the the genuine interest of a specific person if it's real or not. Compared to social media, they can able to to fake their the feelings as well as what they're trying to communicate. So I prepared to to talk personally.

✓ I prefer talking face to face because I can tell whether a person's interest is genuine or not. Compared to social media, people can fake their feelings and what they are trying to communicate. So I prefer to talk in person.

Errors: unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'talking' and 'the genuine interest' and duplicated 'the the'; use 'whether' to introduce alternatives; 'they can able to to fake' is incorrect — use 'people can fake' or 'they are able to fake'; 'prepared to to talk personally' incorrect form — use 'prefer to talk in person' or 'I prefer talking in person'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary articles, correct verb patterns ('able to' + base verb), avoid duplicated words, and use natural expressions like 'in person'.

× I don't normally argue with my friends but I remember one time that I have argued with my long term friends at my previous work. We argue about the specific person that is also their common friends and we had under misunderstand to each other and now we're we're no longer friends because of that incident.

✓ I don't normally argue with my friends, but I remember one time when I argued with my long-term friends at my previous workplace. We argued about a specific person who was also a mutual friend, and we had misunderstandings with each other. Now we are no longer friends because of that incident.

Errors: tense and aspect — 'I have argued' should be simple past 'I argued' to narrate a past event; 'long term' needs hyphen 'long-term' as adjective; 'previous work' better as 'previous workplace'; 'We argue' should be past 'We argued'; 'specific person that is also their common friends' incorrect relative pronoun and number — use 'a specific person who was also a mutual friend'; 'we had under misunderstand to each other' is ungrammatical — use 'we had misunderstandings with each other'. Suggestions: use simple past when recounting specific past events, correct adjective hyphenation, choose correct relative pronouns and pluralization, and use standard collocations ('mutual friend', 'misunderstandings').