Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Сделайте ответ более связным и естественным: начните с общего утверждения, затем кратко развейте мысль с конкретикой (когда, с кем, почему). Избегайте повторов и междометий (uh). Используйте связки (for example, because, so) и правильную грамматику (например, "playing volleyball" вместо "play volleyball").

Ví dụ: I have two main hobbies: drawing and playing volleyball. I usually play volleyball with my friends after school or at the weekend because it helps me relax and have fun. I also enjoy drawing in my free time; I prefer sketching portraits and landscapes because it lets me be creative.

Gợi ý: Будьте конкретнее и избегайте неуверенных фраз. Можно признать частичную память и привести конкретный пример с деталями (что именно собирали, почему это было интересно). Используйте прошедшее время корректно ("when I was a child").

Ví dụ: I don't clearly remember having hobbies when I was very young, but I did collect Kinder Surprise toys when I was about five or six. I enjoyed finding different little figures and trading them with my friends.

Gợi ý: Структурируйте ответ: прямо скажите, есть ли хобби с детства, затем поясните детали (с какого возраста, как развивалось, роль родителей). Уберите слова-паразиты (maybe, uh) и используйте связки (since, because, so).

Ví dụ: Yes, drawing is a hobby I've had since I was about eight or nine. I started with coloring books and my parents encouraged me by buying art supplies and taking me to classes, which helped me improve.

Gợi ý: Отвечайте ясно и избегайте повторов. Сначала дайте короткий ответ, затем добавьте конкретные детали: с кем, где учились, как часто. Используйте хорошие связки (for example, we both, we attend classes at).

Ví dụ: Yes, my sister and I share a hobby: drawing. We both attend a local art centre where we take regular classes, and practising together has helped us improve our skills.

× Yes I have hobbies, my hobby is drawing and play with my friends.

✓ Yes, I have hobbies. My hobbies are drawing and playing with my friends.

The sentence mixes singular and plural and uses incorrect verb form. Use 'hobbies' with plural and parallel forms: 'drawing' and 'playing'. Use commas and periods to separate ideas. Ensure gerund form 'playing' follows 'and' to match 'drawing'.

× Volleyball.

✓ I also play volleyball.

Single-word fragment should be a complete sentence. Add subject and verb: 'I also play volleyball.' This fits the context and creates a full sentence.

× I play volleyball with my friends after school or at the weekends.

✓ I play volleyball with my friends after school or at the weekends.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It correctly uses the present simple for habitual actions.

× Uh play volleyball gives me relax and enjoy and happy moments with my friends.

✓ Playing volleyball relaxes me and gives me enjoyable and happy moments with my friends.

Use the gerund 'playing' as subject and correct verb agreement 'relaxes'. Use 'gives me' with a noun phrase 'enjoyable and happy moments'. 'Relax' as a noun/verb needed correction to 'relaxes'.

× Or a drawing.

✓ I also enjoy drawing.

Fragment corrected to a complete sentence with subject and verb. 'I also enjoy drawing' fits context.

× Drawing is my favorite HOB hobby.

✓ Drawing is my favorite hobby.

Redundant 'HOB hobby' removed and capitalization normalized. Use single word 'hobby' and 'favorite' adjective before it.

× I like drawing.

✓ I like drawing.

This sentence is correct as it stands; present simple correctly expresses a general preference.

× No, I didn't have hobbies when I was child because I don't know or I don't remember it.

✓ No, I didn't have hobbies when I was a child because I don't know or don't remember.

Add article 'a' before 'child'. Maintain tense consistency: use past tense 'didn't have' and explain with present perfect or simple 'don't remember' is acceptable; remove unnecessary object 'it' after 'remember'.

× If I remember, I collected Kinder's toys.

✓ If I remember correctly, I collected Kinder toys.

Add 'correctly' to clarify 'if I remember'. 'Kinder' is a brand; no possessive apostrophe needed. 'Kinder toys' is the noun phrase.

× Maybe it's story I thought when I was 9 or 8.

✓ Maybe it's a story I thought about when I was nine or eight.

Add article 'a' and preposition 'about' after 'thought'. Spell numbers as words for style and clarity.

× Doing helps me relax and uh, I draw with my coloring.

✓ Drawing helps me relax, and I color my drawings.

Use 'drawing' (gerund) as subject. 'I draw with my coloring' is awkward; better: 'I color my drawings' or 'I use colors to draw'.

× Coloring used to draw and my parents help me.

✓ When I was younger, I used to color, and my parents helped me.

Use 'used to' for past habitual action: 'I used to color'. Match past tense 'helped' with 'used to' period. Clarify meaning and correct word order.

× Yes, I have some same hobbies with my sister.

✓ Yes, I share some hobbies with my sister.

Use 'share' instead of 'have some same hobbies with' for natural expression. 'Some same hobbies' is unidiomatic; 'share some hobbies' is correct.

× Uh, we drawing and we went, uh, drawing to, we went to the drawing center and then we learned, uh, drawing there and we now draw better.

✓ We used to draw together. We went to a drawing center where we learned to draw, and now we draw better.

Convert fragments into clear sentences. Use 'used to draw' or 'we drew together' for past habits. 'Went to a drawing center' is fine; 'learned to draw' uses infinitive. 'Now we draw better' expresses present result.