Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise; combine ideas into 2–4 clear sentences, correct grammar (plural/singular, articles), and include a brief specific example to make your answer richer. Avoid repetition and short fragments.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading and I usually finish about two books a week, mostly on AI and business skills. For example, last month I read a book about machine learning applications that gave me practical ideas I could try at work.

Gợi ý: Fix repetitions and tense errors; make the reason-effect relationship clearer using linking words (because, so, therefore). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and give one concrete advantage of paper reading.

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because screens strain my eyes, especially after long periods. Also, with a paper book I can easily flip back to a page and make notes, which helps me remember important points.

Gợi ý: Remove hesitations and use complete sentences with clearer contrasts using linking words (when... but when...). Be specific about what ‘carefully’ means (take notes, re-read). Avoid vague phrases like 'I don't care about that.'

Ví dụ: When I'm studying AI or another professional topic, I read carefully: I take notes, highlight key ideas and re-read difficult sections. But when I read for pleasure about animals or general science, I read more casually and skip parts I find less interesting.

Gợi ý: Eliminate repetition and improve grammar (prefer X to Y; purpose + to-infinitive). Use linking words (because, therefore) and provide a brief, specific example showing when detailed reading helps.

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading rather than scanning because my goal is to obtain accurate information. For example, when I study a research paper on AI, reading in detail helps me understand the methods and results, whereas scanning would miss important points.

× I often go to bookstore.

✓ I often go to the bookstore.

The noun 'bookstore' needs a definite article 'the' when referring to a specific or habitual place you visit. Use 'the bookstore' for a place both speaker and listener understand. Suggestion: use 'the' before singular countable places you frequently visit.

× I love to read on paper, then I love to read on paper then scream because if I watch screen my eyes are really tired so and also if I will read on paper I can touch and I can return to specific pages immediately.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because when I look at a screen my eyes get very tired, and when I read on paper I can touch it and return to specific pages immediately.

Multiple problems: redundant phrases and incorrect conjunction use ('then' and 'so and also') create run-on sentence and unclear logic, and 'if I will read' is incorrect future form. Combine ideas with 'because' and 'and', use simple present for habitual facts ('my eyes get'), and simplify to avoid repetition. Suggestion: break into clearer clauses and use simple present for general truths.

× if I watch screen my eyes are really tired

✓ if I watch a screen my eyes get really tired

Missing article before 'screen' and 'are really tired' is less natural than 'get really tired' for describing the effect. Use 'a screen' and the verb 'get' with simple present to describe a habitual reaction. Suggestion: use articles with singular countable nouns and 'get' for change of state.

× I love to learn new knowledge from books.

✓ I love to learn new things from books.

'New knowledge' is grammatically possible but sounds unnatural; native speakers say 'learn new things' or 'gain new knowledge.' Suggestion: use 'learn new things' or 'gain new knowledge' for natural expression.

× If I scan is will be lack of information.

✓ If I scan, there will be a lack of information.

Wrong word order and verb form: 'is will be' is ungrammatical. Use future 'there will be' to state the result of scanning, and include the article 'a' before 'lack of information.' Suggestion: use 'there will be' for stating future consequences and include articles.

× I read two books each week, especially about AI or business skills.

✓ I read two books each week, especially about AI or business skills.

This sentence is grammatically correct in simple present to describe habitual action. No change needed. Suggestion: keep simple present for routines.

× I love to read on paper, then I love to read on paper then scream because if I watch screen my eyes are really tired so and also if I will read on paper I can touch and I can return to specific pages immediately.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because when I look at a screen my eyes get very tired; also, when I read on paper I can touch it and return to specific pages immediately.

Use 'prefer' and simple present 'look' and 'get' for habitual preferences and effects. Remove repeated phrases and replace 'scream' (likely 'screen') with intended meaning. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use clear linking words.

× So I really carefully, but uh, when I read about animals, science, like my hobby, I don't care about that.

✓ So I read very carefully, but when I read about animals or science as a hobby, I don't worry about details.

Original lacks verb form after 'really' ('carefully' needs accompanying verb) and has awkward phrasing. Use 'read very carefully' and 'don't worry about details' for clarity. Suggestion: ensure adverb has a verb and simplify hobby clause.

× If I will read on paper I can touch and I can return to specific pages immediately.

✓ If I read on paper, I can touch it and return to specific pages immediately.

Do not use 'will' in the if-clause for real conditional; use simple present 'read.' Also include the pronoun 'it' for 'paper.' Suggestion: use zero/first conditional structure: 'If I read..., I can...'.

× I prefer I prefer reading details than scanning because it's purpose to read is to gain information for me.

✓ I prefer detailed reading to scanning because my purpose in reading is to gain information.

Redundant 'I prefer I prefer' and incorrect comparative structure 'reading details than scanning.' Use 'prefer X to Y' and 'detailed reading' or 'reading in detail.' Also correct 'it's purpose to read is' to 'my purpose in reading is.' Suggestion: avoid repetition and use 'prefer A to B' and clear noun phrases.

× So to read to read details is more useful.

✓ So reading in detail is more useful.

Redundant 'to read to read' and awkward infinitive usage. Use gerund 'reading in detail' to describe the activity. Suggestion: use gerund phrases for general activities and avoid repetition.