Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and fluency: give a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles, limit to 2–3 sentences, and add one specific example with a linking phrase. Focus on natural phrasing (e.g., “I enjoy reading because…”).

Ví dụ: I enjoy reading because it helps me learn about many subjects. For example, a couple of weeks ago I read an article about the history of my region, which gave me new insights into local traditions.

Gợi ý: Work on natural sentence order, article usage and conciseness: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one linked reason and a brief example. Use correct collocations like “read on paper” and “comfortable for my eyes.”

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because it is more comfortable for my eyes. Also, I enjoy the feeling of holding a book, and I find it easier to concentrate on printed pages than on digital screens.

Gợi ý: Correct repetition and grammar, clarify contrasts and provide specific examples. Use linking words (“when,” “while,” “on the other hand”) properly and avoid repeating words. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I study for competitive exams or when I prepare important documents because accuracy is essential. On the other hand, I usually skim simple instructions or short messages if they look straightforward.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and coherence: state your preference clearly, give 1–2 linked reasons using correct forms (e.g., “scanning saves time”), and avoid unclear claims (scanning doesn’t usually improve long-term memory). Be concise and natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer scanning because it saves time when I just need the main points. However, for complex topics I do detailed reading to understand and remember the information thoroughly.

× Of course, yes, being a bookworm I like to read a different kind of things which because it enhance my knowledge about the various aspects.

✓ Of course. Being a bookworm, I like to read different kinds of things because they enhance my knowledge about various aspects.

Errors: 'a different kind of things' mixes singular and plural and should be 'different kinds of things' or 'different kinds of books'; 'which because' is incorrect connector; 'it enhance' has subject-verb disagreement and wrong pronoun. Correction: remove redundant 'yes', add commas for clarity, use plural 'different kinds of things', replace 'which because' with 'because', use plural subject 'they' with verb 'enhance'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, ensure noun and verb forms agree and connectors are used properly.

× For example, couple of week ago I read about a one article which provide me knowledge about my historical period.

✓ For example, a couple of weeks ago I read an article that provided me with knowledge about my historical period.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'couple', 'week' should be plural 'weeks', 'about a one article' is wrong — use 'an article', 'which provide' wrong verb form and relative clause should be 'that provided me with'. Correction: add 'a', pluralize 'weeks', use 'an article', change verb to past 'provided' and include 'with'. Suggestion: check articles and pluralization, match tense consistency for past events.

× To be honest, I like to paper reading because it is a comfortable for my eyes.

✓ To be honest, I prefer reading on paper because it is more comfortable for my eyes.

Errors: 'like to paper reading' has incorrect word order and preposition; 'a comfortable' wrong article and adjective use. Correction: use 'prefer reading on paper' and 'more comfortable' without 'a'. Suggestion: learn common verb patterns (prefer + -ing) and prepositions for media (read on paper, read on a screen).

× Apart from this, I like to the sensation of holding any kind of book and magazine in my hand and I easily consulted on my content without any distraction which usually come in the digital.

✓ Apart from that, I like the sensation of holding books and magazines in my hands, and I can easily consult my content without the distractions that usually come with digital formats.

Errors: 'like to the sensation' incorrect verb form; 'any kind of book and magazine' inconsistent number—use plural; 'in my hand' should be 'in my hands'; 'consulted on my content' wrong verb form and preposition; 'which usually come in the digital' incorrect relative clause and missing noun. Correction: use 'like the sensation', pluralize nouns, 'consult my content', and 'distractions that usually come with digital formats'. Suggestion: ensure verb forms match and prepositions collocate correctly (come with, consult something).

× To be honest, I pay a much attention on reading when I prepare any competing competing exam as well as set my document because when it leads to a success.

✓ To be honest, I pay a lot of attention to reading when I prepare for competitive exams or when I am preparing documents because it helps me succeed.

Errors: 'pay a much attention' wrong quantifier and noun form—use 'pay a lot of attention' or 'pay much attention'; 'on reading' should be 'to reading'; 'competing competing exam' repetition and wrong adjective—use 'competitive exams'; 'set my document' unclear—interpreted as 'prepare documents'; 'when it leads to a success' unnatural and tense/phrasing incorrect. Correction: use 'prepare for competitive exams', 'prepare documents', and 'it helps me succeed'. Suggestion: use standard collocations (pay attention to, prepare for), avoid repetition, and keep tense consistent.

× On the other hand, I do not pay pay much attention or reading while reading any kind of instructions.

✓ On the other hand, I do not pay much attention when reading instructions.

Errors: duplicated word 'pay pay'; 'pay much attention or reading' incorrect coordination—should be 'pay much attention when reading'; 'any kind of instructions' odd quantifier—use 'reading instructions' or 'any instructions'. Correction: simplify to 'do not pay much attention when reading instructions'. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use correct conjunctions ('when') and prepositions.

× Well, I prefer to scanning reading because it might save time, so that's why I do not like to detail reading because scanning reading or not only say my time but also help for me to remember a thing long time.

✓ Well, I prefer scanning because it saves time, so I do not like detailed reading; scanning not only saves my time but also helps me remember things for a long time.

Errors: 'prefer to scanning reading' wrong infinitive/gerund choice and redundant 'reading'; 'it might save time' modal uncertainty—use simple present 'saves' for a general habit; 'detail reading' should be 'detailed reading'; 'scanning reading or not only say my time' multiple errors: 'or' wrong, 'say my time' incorrect verb, missing plural 'things' and 'for a long time'; verb agreement 'help for me' should be 'helps me'. Correction: use 'prefer scanning', 'saves', 'detailed reading', 'scanning not only saves my time but also helps me remember things for a long time'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms (prefer + -ing), maintain subject-verb agreement, and choose correct idiomatic expressions.