Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Yes, especially before the baths. I prefer read some books and just read uh, release my stress through this weighing.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
Oh, maybe I'm a traditional person. I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen because I think for the whole day I have spent a long time on the screen, so it's not good for my eyes. I will choose to read on paper.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
I think when I miss some books I really interested in and it's so funny, I will read carefully. But for some like motivating books I don't think I will pay much attention to it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
If I raised some funny story or some interesting books I will read the details, but for some motivational books, no I just scanning it because I don't think it would attract me so much.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并直接回应问题。注意语法(时态、动词形式)和用词搭配,避免含糊和重复;将内容控制在最多5句话内并使用连词使表达更连贯。例如说明何时、为什么喜欢读书并举一两个具体例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially in the evening before I take a bath. It helps me relax and relieve stress after a busy day. I usually read short stories or light fiction to unwind. For example, a good short story can calm my mind and help me sleep better.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰但可更精炼与自然。修正小错误(如冠词与时态),使用连接词提高连贯性,并补充一两项具体细节(例如纸质书的触感、注记习惯)来丰富内容。控制在3–4句内。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because I spend a lot of time looking at screens during the day, and printed books are easier on my eyes. I also like the feel of the pages and the ability to make notes in the margins. So for long reading sessions I usually choose paper books.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 要更明确地区分两种阅读情形并用更恰当的词汇表达原因。避免语法错误(例如'miss'应为'miss'不合适,应改为'miss' -> 'come across'或'miss'->'am reading'),并用连接词(because, whereas)使句子逻辑清楚。给出具体例子,比如喜欢的书籍类型或如何快速浏览。
Ví dụ: I read carefully when the book really captures my interest, such as a funny novel or a mystery, because I want to follow the plot and enjoy the language. However, for self-help or motivational books I tend to skim sections for useful tips rather than read every detail.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答思路明确但需改进语法与用词(例如'use "read in detail"或"read carefully"而非"read the details";'raised'应改为'find'或'come across')。使用连接词(for example, however)并举具体例子说明何时详读、何时略读。保持句子简短、自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading when I find a story or book that is interesting, because I want to understand the characters and plot. However, I usually scan motivational books for key points and practical advice rather than reading every paragraph.
× I prefer read some books and just read uh, release my stress through this weighing.
✓ I prefer reading some books and just, uh, release my stress through this way.
句中動詞 prefer 後應接動名詞(-ing)或不定式,但慣用動詞 prefer 後接動名詞較常見,所以應改為 reading。此外原句的 weighing 顯然是拼寫或用詞錯誤,應為 way(方式)。建議記住常見動詞後接的形式:prefer + -ing;並注意單詞拼寫。
× I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen because I think for the whole day I have spent a long time on the screen, so it's not good for my eyes.
✓ I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen because I think I spend too much time looking at screens during the day, so it isn't good for my eyes.
原句中混用了時態和不自然的表達(have spent a long time / for the whole day),在說一般習慣時用現在簡單更合適:I spend too much time。建議使用簡潔的現在時描述日常習慣,並用常見搭配:spend time + -ing(spend time looking at screens)。
× I will choose to read on paper.
✓ I choose to read on paper.
句前文在描述習慣傾向,用一般現在時更自然。使用 I will choose 強調將來選擇,與上下文不太一致。建議描述習慣時使用一般現在時(I choose / I prefer)。
× I think when I miss some books I really interested in and it's so funny, I will read carefully.
✓ I think when I come across books I'm really interested in and that are funny, I read them carefully.
原句結構混亂:miss 用法不當(miss 意為錯過/想念),且主句時態不一致(will read vs. 描述習慣應用一般現在時)。建議使用 come across 或 find 表達遇到書籍,並保持時態一致:一般現在時描述習慣(I read them carefully)。此外 also 語序與關係代詞用法需調整為 that/which 引導定語從句。
× But for some like motivating books I don't think I will pay much attention to it.
✓ But for some motivating books, I don't think I will pay much attention to them.
代詞 it 與先行詞 books(複數)不一致,應使用複數代詞 them。此外句中時態用一般將來(I will)可視語境保留,但描述習慣則可用一般現在時。建議檢查代詞與先行詞的人/物和單複數一致。
× If I raised some funny story or some interesting books I will read the details, but for some motivational books, no I just scanning it because I don't think it would attract me so much.
✓ If I read a funny story or an interesting book, I read the details, but for some motivational books, I just scan them because I don't think they would attract me that much.
原句時態與動詞形式錯誤(raised 不合適,應為 read;just scanning it 為不完整的動名詞片語且代詞不一致)。建議用條件句描述習慣時用一般現在時(If I read... I read...),並注意動詞原形/時態和代詞單複數一致(books → them)。另外 scan 為動詞應用原形或與主語一致的時態形式。