Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence naming your favourite food, then give one or two brief specific reasons or details (e.g., flavours, occasions when you eat them). Use correct word order and avoid redundant phrases.

Ví dụ: My favourite foods are traditional dishes from my country, such as biryani, chicken kebabs and chapatis. I love biryani for its rich spices and layers of rice and meat, and I often eat chapatis at home because they are simple and comforting.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence about what you liked, then explain briefly why with a specific example. Avoid vague filler phrases and correct tense/use of articles. Keep answers to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: When I was young I liked spicy, fast foods such as fried snacks and sugary drinks. I ate them because I wasn’t aware of healthy choices then and I was attracted to their strong flavours and convenience.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with one clear sentence stating whether you change food seasonally, then give a specific example of seasonal variation and use linking words (e.g., however, for example). Avoid long, unstructured sentences.

Ví dụ: Occasionally we eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer we prefer lighter dishes and more salads, while in winter people tend to eat richer, spicier meals.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct statement whether it has changed, then briefly explain what changed and why using linking words (e.g., because, so). Be concise and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite foods have changed. As a child I liked very spicy and fried snacks, but now I prefer traditional dishes like biryani and kebabs because I appreciate their flavours and cultural value.

× Traditional foods that are usually used in our country that are my favorite food including biryani, chicken kebabs and chapatis.

✓ Traditional foods that are commonly eaten in our country are my favorite foods, including biryani, chicken kebabs, and chapatis.

The original mixes singular 'favorite food' with plural items; number should agree. Use 'commonly eaten' instead of 'usually used'. Also adjust article and list punctuation. Suggestion: match plural nouns and verbs (are my favorite foods) and use verbs appropriate for eating (eat/eaten).

× Yes, some spicy and unhealthy food. I was like when I was a young because due to the unawareness. So it's you know, it was a childhood and no everyone knows about it. So just focusing on the refreshment. So that's.

✓ Yes, I liked some spicy and unhealthy foods when I was young because I was unaware of their effects. It was childhood, so not everyone knew about healthy eating; we focused on taste and refreshment.

Multiple sentence-structure and tense problems: fragment 'Yes, some spicy and unhealthy food' lacks a verb; 'I was like when I was a young' is ungrammatical. Correct by using past tense 'liked' and plural 'foods', and clarify cause ('because I was unaware'). Combine ideas into coherent sentences and replace vague phrases ('it's you know') with clear expressions. Use semicolons or separate sentences to avoid run-ons.

× Occasionally, but it's not usually we are doing in our country because in a whole years we use a similar foods, but a little bit change is happen in our tradition like in a summer we used or that kind of foods that.

✓ Occasionally, but we do not usually change our food much because throughout the year we eat similar foods; only small changes happen in our traditions, for example in summer we eat different seasonal dishes.

Problems with quantifiers and determiners: 'a whole years' should be 'throughout the year' or 'the whole year'; 'a similar foods' mixes article with plural. Also word order is wrong ('it's not usually we are doing'). Correct quantifiers and use proper subject-verb order. Use 'small changes' and 'seasonal dishes' for clarity.

× Yes, when I was a child, so I used to eat a spicy food that was my favorite at that time. Now I changed myself and my favorite dishes now are traditional dishes in our country.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I used to eat spicy food; it was my favorite then. Now I have changed, and my favorite dishes are traditional dishes from our country.

Use of past habits should be 'used to eat' (correct), but 'a spicy food' is incorrect—use uncountable 'spicy food' or plural. 'Now I changed myself' is unnatural; use 'Now I have changed' or 'I have changed my preferences'. Ensure tense consistency: past for childhood habit, present perfect for change affecting present.