Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Улучшите точность и ясность высказывания: начинайте с прямого ответа, используйте подходящие слова (например, "tall buildings", а не "toy buildings"), согласование артиклей и множественного числа, и добавляйте одно-два конкретных примера. Старайтесь не повторять мысли и избегать лишних слов вроде "because of this" без контекста.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a 20-storey office tower and a large shopping mall within a ten-minute walk. These buildings make the area feel more modern and provide convenient services like shops and restaurants.

Gợi ý: Сосредоточьтесь на чётком и кратком ответе: начните с "No" или "Yes", объясните причину простым языком и избегайте неуместных слов (например, "darkest"). Используйте связку для пояснения и приведите пример ситуации, когда могли бы фотографировать.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings. I prefer to admire architecture in person rather than photograph it, although I sometimes take pictures when visiting famous landmarks to remember the visit.

Gợi ý: Дайте конкретный ответ и приведите пример: назовите конкретное здание или тип здания, объясните, почему вы хотите его посетить, с 1–2 конкретными причинами. Уберите повторения и исправьте порядок слов.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Guggenheim Museum in Bilbao. I'm interested in its modern architecture and unique interior; visiting would let me see famous artworks and learn more about contemporary design.

Gợi ý: Разрешите противоречие и сформулируйте однозначный ответ: либо "Yes" с аргументами, либо "No" с причинами. Дайте 2 конкретные причины (удобства, вид, близость к работе) и избегайте невнятных фраз вроде "UH concert, teacher". Используйте связки для логики.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it often offers good facilities like a gym and security, and it is usually close to shops and public transport. For instance, living in a high-rise near the city center would make my commute to work much easier.

× At the moment, I am living in big city.

✓ At the moment, I am living in a big city.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'big city'. Use 'a' with singular countable nouns when mentioning them for the first time. Suggestion: remember to include articles with singular countable nouns (e.g., 'a city', 'an apartment').

× Because of this, many types of toy buildings are able such as school, banks and others.

✓ Because of this, many types of buildings are available, such as schools, banks, and others.

The phrase 'toy buildings are able' is incorrect. 'Able' is not used to describe availability; use 'available'. Also, 'school' and 'banks' need consistent plural forms. Suggestion: use 'available' to indicate that things exist, and make listed nouns plural for general categories ('schools, banks').

× This buildings can create opportunities for life and user-friendly for my daily life.

✓ These buildings can create opportunities and be user-friendly for my daily life.

'This buildings' is incorrect: the demonstrative must match number ('these' for plural). Also 'create opportunities for life' is awkward; simplify to 'create opportunities'. Use 'be user-friendly' to make grammatical sense. Suggestion: match demonstratives to noun number and rephrase for clarity.

× I have a darkest in take photos to the address.

✓ I have a dislike of taking photos of buildings.

The original uses 'a darkest' which is incorrect; likely meant 'a dislike'. Also 'in take photos to the address' is ungrammatical. Use the noun 'dislike of' and the gerund 'taking photos of'. Suggestion: use 'dislike of' + gerund and 'take photos of' when referring to photographing something.

× I don't like uh take building photos because I'm not interested in this photos.

✓ I don't like taking photos of buildings because I'm not interested in these photos.

Use the gerund 'taking' after 'like'. Also 'this photos' is incorrect; use 'these photos' for plural. Suggestion: use gerunds after verbs like 'like' and match demonstrative pronouns to number.

× I like watching this instead of taking.

✓ I prefer watching buildings instead of taking photos.

The sentence is vague: 'this' and 'taking' need objects. Use 'prefer' for contrast and include clear objects: 'watching buildings' and 'taking photos'. Suggestion: supply objects for pronouns and gerunds to avoid ambiguity.

× Yes I do, I generally enjoy visit to buildings such as modern such as parks because it's really enjoyable for me.

✓ Yes, I do. I generally enjoy visiting buildings and modern parks because it's really enjoyable for me.

Use the gerund 'visiting' after 'enjoy'. The phrase 'modern such as parks' is redundant; reorder to 'modern parks'. Add punctuation to separate sentences. Suggestion: use 'enjoy' + gerund and list items clearly.

× I really appreciate visit this place because it not only gives me entertainment but also can create as opportunities such as uh, watching sightseeing places.

✓ I really appreciate visiting this place because it not only gives me entertainment but also creates opportunities, such as sightseeing.

Use the gerund 'visiting' after 'appreciate'. 'Visit this place' is incorrect form. 'Can create as opportunities' is ungrammatical; use 'creates opportunities'. 'Watching sightseeing places' is awkward; use 'sightseeing'. Suggestion: use gerunds after 'appreciate', simplify 'creates opportunities', and use standard collocations like 'sightseeing'.

× Yes I do, I don't enjoy living in tall buildings because it not only gives me gives me entertainment but also create method of opportunities such as better learning opportunities and better job opportunities.

✓ Yes, I do. I enjoy living in tall buildings because they not only give me entertainment but also create opportunities such as better learning and job prospects.

The original contains a contradiction: 'Yes I do' followed by 'I don't enjoy', and redundancy 'gives me gives me'. Use plural 'they' for 'tall buildings' and correct verb agreement: 'give' and 'create'. 'Method of opportunities' is incorrect; use 'create opportunities' and simpler phrases like 'job prospects'. Suggestion: avoid contradictory statements, fix subject-verb agreement, and remove redundancies.

× Many types of big buildings offer UH concert, teacher and advanced technologies.

✓ Many large buildings offer concerts, teachers, and advanced technologies.

Use plural forms for countable nouns: 'concerts' and 'teachers'. 'UH' is filler; remove it. Also 'big buildings' => 'large buildings' is more natural. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally and avoid filler words.