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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Thí sinh

Yes, there these are.

Giám khảo

Do you take photos of buildings?

Thí sinh

No, I don't. I like take photos of, uh, the natural. I don't like buildings, you know?

Giám khảo

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Thí sinh

Yes, the Empire State.

Giám khảo

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Thí sinh

No, I don't wanna because because I will. I will be killed if if it have a fire.

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Part 1

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、完整并直接回应问题。可以用一到两句说明是否有高楼,并给出位置或数量等具体信息,避免语法错误(如“there these are”应为“there are”)。尽量控制在五句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a 20‑storey apartment block and a few office towers along the main road.

Do you take photos of buildings?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答要自然流利并注意语法,用连贯词衔接观点。把口语填充词(uh, you know)减少,改为简洁解释原因并给出替代选项或例子,词语用法也要正确(如“the natural”应改为“natural scenes”)。

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually photograph buildings. I prefer taking pictures of natural scenes, such as mountains and forests, because I enjoy capturing colours and textures in nature.

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更完整,直接命名建筑后补充理由或背景。使用连接词扩展一两句,使答案更具体(例如说明原因、期待看到的景色或历史背景)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Empire State Building because it offers panoramic views of New York City and has an interesting history as an iconic skyscraper from the 1930s.

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更礼貌、准确且避免重复。用恰当原因解释担忧(例如安全或不便),语法要正确(如“if it have a fire”应为“if there were a fire”或“if a fire broke out”),避免夸张表述,保持自然语气。

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I'm concerned about safety and evacuation during emergencies, such as if a fire broke out, it might be harder to get out quickly.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect demonstrative/pronoun usage

× Yes, there these are.

Yes, there are.

原句中“there these are”中混用了地点副词“there”和指示代词“these”且语序不正确。正确的表达是使用存在句型“There are”来表示“那里有……”。建议记住存在句的固定结构:There + be + 主语。

Verb + -ing form

× I like take photos of, uh, the natural.

I like taking photos of nature.

句子中动词like后面应接动名词(taking)而不是动词原形(take)。同时“the natural”用法不当,应改为名词“nature”。建议记住:like/enjoy等动词后接动名词,且用正确名词形式表达对象。

Incorrect use of articles / Incorrect use of adjectives or nouns

× I don't like buildings, you know?

I don't like buildings, you know?

该句语法正确,无需改动。这里的“buildings”作复数名词使用正确。提供说明以表明无错误。

Article errors

× Yes, the Empire State.

Yes, the Empire State Building.

回答只说“The Empire State”会导致不完整或模糊。通常应使用全称“The Empire State Building”来指代具体建筑,加上定冠词the表示特指。建议使用完整名称以避免歧义。

Colloquial/incorrect verb form and subject-verb agreement

× No, I don't wanna because because I will. I will be killed if if it have a fire.

No, I don't want to because I could be killed if there is a fire in it.

原句问题有几处:1) “wanna”是口语缩写,不适合正式书面表达,应改为“want to”。2) 重复单词“because because”和“if if”应去掉重复。3) 条件句中“it have a fire”主谓不一致,且用法不当;正确表达是“There is a fire in it”或“if it catches fire”。此外,“will be killed”在条件句中用“could be killed”更符合说话者的推测语气。建议:使用完整形式(want to),避免重复,使用正确的主谓一致(it has/there is),并在条件句中用情态动词表达可能性。

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