Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify the answer with a direct topic sentence, use specific details, and avoid fillers. Mention whether there are tall buildings, describe what kinds they are and where they are located, and use one or two linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are a few tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a modern apartment tower next to the shopping mall and an office block by the main garden. Because they are close to the main road, I can see them from my window every day.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement, give a specific reason and an example, and use a linking word to expand. Replace vague words like “beautiful” and “memory” with more descriptive reasons (architecture style, light, personal interest).

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I enjoy their architecture and the way light falls on them. For example, I like photographing old brick houses in the evening, so I can capture warm colours and interesting shadows.

Gợi ý: Answer directly naming the building, give one or two specific reasons why you want to visit it, and link the ideas with a connective. Avoid repetition and hesitations.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Paragon building because it has impressive modern architecture and a large indoor garden. In addition, I heard the observation deck offers great views of the city, so I could take photos and learn more about its design.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct statement about your preference, explain specific reasons (views, convenience, facilities) and use a linking word to expand. Reduce hesitation and repeat words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it offers great views and usually has good facilities like a gym and security. Moreover, living high up is quieter than street level, which would suit my lifestyle.

× Uh is building near you how uh example, uh garden and shopping mall uh example Friday in Utah did.

✓ Are there buildings near you, such as a garden or a shopping mall?

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing words, making it ungrammatical. This fits 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). To improve, use the correct question structure 'Are there' for existence and plural 'buildings' when asking generally. Place examples after a phrase like 'such as' and remove irrelevant words (e.g., 'Friday in Utah did'). Suggestion: Practice forming questions with 'Are there' + plural noun + examples introduced by 'such as' or 'for example'.

× Yes, I take photo of building because it is beautiful and uh, memory.

✓ Yes, I take photos of buildings because they are beautiful and memorable.

The sentence uses singular forms 'photo' and 'building' when referring to general plural objects; this is a 'Singular and plural issue' (ID 1). Also 'memory' is a noun but 'memorable' (adjective) fits after 'are' to describe why you take photos. To improve, use plural nouns when speaking about habits in general and match adjectives correctly: 'take photos of buildings because they are beautiful and memorable.'

× Yes, I, I have a building is this is a example. So yeah, Paragon, uh, building is, is beautiful and really big.

✓ Yes, there is a building I would like to visit. It is called Paragon; the building is beautiful and very big.

The original contains disfluent phrases and incorrect structure; classify as 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). Use a clear subject and verb: 'there is a building I would like to visit' and name it: 'It is called Paragon.' Replace fillers and stuttering with complete clauses. Also use 'very' instead of 'really' for formality and fluency. Suggestion: Prepare a short, rehearsed sentence naming the building and stating qualities.

× Yes, it is in my dream because uh, I usually, uh, love, uh, see, see building tall around.

✓ Yes, it is my dream because I usually love seeing tall buildings around.

The original has awkward tense and verb form use; this is a 'Present tense issue' (ID 6) and also a problem with verb + -ing form. Use the gerund 'seeing' after 'love' to describe a general preference. 'It is my dream' is the correct phrase. Remove repetitions and filler words for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'I usually love seeing...' or 'I like seeing...' and practice combining verbs with gerunds when appropriate.