Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 문장 구조 오류를 줄이고 간결하게 말하세요. 주제 문장으로 직접 답하고, 필요하면 한두 문장으로 구체적 세부사항(예: 몇 층짜리 건물이 많은지, 어느 지역에 집중되어 있는지)을 덧붙이세요. 또한 시제와 복수형 사용에 주의하세요 (예: have → has, building→buildings). 연결어(for example, especially 등)를 자연스럽게 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, the downtown area has several apartment complexes that are over twenty stories high, which were mostly built in the past few years.

Gợi ý: 의사를 분명히 표현하고 이유를 자연스러운 문장으로 연결하세요. 불필요하게 끊기는 표현을 피하고, 연결어(so, because, instead)를 사용해 이유와 선호를 논리적으로 연결하세요.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because I prefer to enjoy the moment in person. Instead of taking pictures, I focus on the view and the atmosphere when I visit a place.

Gợi ý: 동사의 형태와 어순을 바로잡고 건물 이름을 정확히 표현하세요. 주제 문장 다음에 한두 문장으로 이유(예: 전망, 건축양식)를 덧붙이되, 반복을 피하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Lotte World Tower in Seoul. It is the tallest building in Korea, and I want to go up to the observation deck to see a panoramic view of the city.

Gợi ý: 부정 표현 뒤에 이유를 명확하게 설명하세요. 문법 오류(예: want to the Rd. building)와 어색한 표현을 고치고, 구체적 이유(예: 엘리베이터 대기시간, 이웃과의 거리감)를 간결하게 제시하세요. 연결어(because, so, therefore)를 사용해 논리를 전개하세요.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because elevators are often crowded and it can take a long time to go up and down. I prefer a low-rise building where it's easier to go outside quickly.

× Yes, our city have many tall buildings.

✓ Yes, our city has many tall buildings.

Subject-verb agreement: 'city' is singular so the verb must be 'has' not 'have'. Use singular verb with singular noun. Suggestion: identify the subject (city) and use third-person singular verb form 'has'.

× There are lots of building and apartments, especially at apartment is very high.

✓ There are lots of buildings and apartments, and some apartments are very high.

Pluralization and sentence structure: 'building' should be plural 'buildings' to match 'lots of'. The clause 'especially at apartment is very high' is ungrammatical; it should be rephrased to 'some apartments are very high'. Suggestion: make nouns plural when referring to many items and connect ideas with conjunctions.

× Because our city makes a recently. Recently.

✓ Because our city has developed recently.

Incorrect verb choice and sentence fragment: 'makes a recently' is not correct English. Use 'has developed recently' or 'has grown recently' to express recent development. Avoid sentence fragments like 'Recently.' Combine ideas into one clear sentence.

× No I don't. I don't like take a picture I enjoy.

✓ No, I don't. I don't like taking pictures; I prefer to enjoy the moment.

Verb + -ing form and sentence flow: after 'like' use the gerund 'taking' not the base verb 'take'. 'I enjoy' is incomplete—add object or rephrase. Suggestion: use 'I don't like taking pictures' and explain preference with 'I prefer to enjoy the moment.'

× I usually enjoy the moment so I prefer. Like directly visited.

✓ I usually enjoy the moment, so I prefer not to take photos when I visit places in person.

Incomplete sentences and unclear fragments: 'so I prefer.' needs an object or further explanation. 'Like directly visited' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: state full preference and clarify meaning: 'I prefer not to take photos when I visit places in person.'

× Yes I do. I want to visited root tower in Seoul.

✓ Yes, I do. I want to visit Lotte World Tower in Seoul.

Incorrect verb form: after 'want to' use the base form 'visit', not the past form 'visited'. Also proper noun correction: likely 'Lotte World Tower'. Suggestion: use infinitive after 'want to' and check proper names.

× It is the most the highest building in Korea so I I hope to visit there.

✓ It is the highest building in Korea, so I hope to visit it.

Redundancy and pronoun misuse: 'the most the highest' is redundant; use 'the highest'. 'Visit there' is odd—use 'visit it' or 'visit there' rarely; better 'visit it'. Also remove repeated 'I'. Suggestion: use simple superlative 'the highest' and correct object pronoun.

× No, I don't. I want to the Rd. building because tall building is not come is on convenience.

✓ No, I don't. I want to live in a low-rise building because tall buildings are not convenient.

Multiple issues: missing verb after 'want to' and incorrect phrases. 'the Rd. building' is unclear; likely meant 'low-rise building'. 'is not come is on convenience' is ungrammatical—use 'are not convenient'. Suggestion: use 'want to live in', choose correct adjective 'low-rise', and use plural 'buildings are' with adjective 'convenient'.

× Their elevator is spent a long time.

✓ Their elevators take a long time.

Incorrect verb and agreement: 'is spent a long time' is wrong. Use 'take a long time' to say elevators are slow. Also match plural 'elevators'. Suggestion: say 'elevators take a long time' or 'the elevator takes a long time' depending on singular/plural.