Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one clear supporting detail. Avoid repetition and fix minor grammar (e.g. 'in the bus' → 'on the bus'). Use a linking word if adding detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually look out of the car or bus window to relax, because seeing changing landscapes helps me unwind during long journeys.

Gợi ý: Organize the answer: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g. 'these pictures', 'it's great fun' or 'it's entertaining'). Avoid redundant phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos from the car window because the light and scenery change quickly, and I can share the best shots with my friends. For example, I recently photographed a sunset over the highway and sent it to my sister.

Gợi ý: Give a direct preference sentence, then explain with specific reasons and one example. Avoid repeating adverbs and use natural phrases (e.g. 'photogenic', 'beautiful colour').

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because it is more photogenic and the blue tones are very calming. For instance, I love taking pictures of the shoreline at sunset when the water turns a deep, warm blue.

× Yes I do, I look out of the window at the scenery when traveling by car or the bus. I love this so much.

✓ Yes, I do. I look out of the window at the scenery when travelling by car or by bus. I love it so much.

Use consistent prepositions: say 'by car' and 'by bus' (not 'the bus' after 'by'). Use 'look out of the window' is acceptable but 'look out of the window at the scenery' is fine; add punctuation and replace 'this' with 'it' to refer to the activity. Also use consistent British spelling 'travelling' if matching transcript. Suggestion: Use 'by car' and 'by bus' and separate ideas with periods for clarity.

× Yes I do. I love taking photos of the scenery outside the car, the window. I love this so much because when I take pictures for this I can send to my friends this pictures. It's like something very entertainment.

✓ Yes, I do. I love taking photos of the scenery outside the car window. I love it so much because when I take pictures I can send them to my friends. It's very entertaining.

Combine 'car' and 'window' into 'car window' (no comma). Replace vague 'this' with 'it' and correct pronoun 'this pictures' to 'them' for plural. 'It's like something very entertainment' is ungrammatical: use the adjective 'entertaining' or phrase 'very entertaining.' Also add commas and periods for sentence clarity. Suggestion: Use correct object pronouns (them) and noun/adjective forms (entertaining).

× So I prefer the sea because it's very, very nice at the photos and it has a color very, very, very good. And I love this color of the sea.

✓ I prefer the sea because it looks very nice in photos and it has a very beautiful colour. I love the colour of the sea.

Use 'in photos' rather than 'at the photos'. Replace awkward 'it has a color very, very, very good' with 'it has a very beautiful colour'. Use 'colour' or 'color' consistently. 'I love this color of the sea' should be 'I love the colour of the sea.' Also remove filler 'very, very' or limit repetition for natural speech. Suggestion: Use 'looks in photos' and correct word order for adjectives ('very beautiful').