Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, correct small grammar errors, avoid redundant phrases like 'lookout of the window' and 'some scenery'. Add one specific detail and use a linking word to enrich the answer. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I especially enjoy watching changing landscapes, such as fields and small towns, because they help me relax. For example, I like seeing farmers working in the fields when the bus passes rural areas.

Gợi ý: Make the reply grammatically correct and concise. Use a clear conditional structure and a linking word. Be specific about what kinds of scenery prompt you to take photos and mention any constraints (e.g., safety or motion blur).

Ví dụ: It depends on the view; if it is especially beautiful, I will take photos. For instance, when there is a colorful sunset or an impressive mountain range, I take pictures, although I avoid taking photos while driving for safety reasons.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear preference and correct grammar. Give a concrete reason and an example; avoid unclear phrases like 'find my face'—replace with expressions such as 'feel at peace' or 'feel myself'. Use linking words to connect reason and example.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because they make me feel calm and focused. For example, hiking in the mountains helps me clear my mind and enjoy fresh air, whereas the sea is more about relaxation and crowds for me.

× Yes, when I travel by bus or car, I look at the lookout of the window and some scenery. Natural sceneries.

✓ Yes, when I travel by bus or car, I look out of the window at the scenery.

The phrase 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window' is the correct prepositional pattern; 'look at the lookout of the window' is incorrect and redundant. 'Scenery' is an uncountable noun, so use singular 'scenery' rather than 'sceneries'. Combine fragments into one sentence for clarity. Suggestion: use 'look out of the window at the scenery' or simply 'look out the window at the scenery.'

× Honestly is depend on the scenery. If the scenery was very beautiful and I then I take photos of the scenery.

✓ Honestly, it depends on the scenery. If the scenery is very beautiful, then I take photos of it.

The original has missing subject 'it' and incorrect verb form 'is depend' instead of modal/verb agreement 'depends'. Use present simple 'depends' for habitual action. The conditional sentence should use present simple in the if-clause ('if the scenery is very beautiful') for general conditions. Replace the repeated 'the scenery' with pronoun 'it' to avoid repetition. Also remove the extra 'I' after 'and'.

× Basically I love to climbing mountains because in the mountains I find my face.

✓ Basically, I love climbing mountains because in the mountains I find myself.

Use the gerund 'climbing' after 'love' rather than the infinitive 'to climbing' which is ungrammatical. 'Find my face' is an incorrect idiom; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'myself' to express personal discovery. Also add commas for natural speech. Suggestion: 'I love climbing mountains' and 'I find myself' are natural English expressions.