Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and relevant, with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. To improve, reduce minor repetition (two sentences saying similar things about relaxing) and add a brief specific example or contrast to make it more vivid. Use one linking word to connect ideas for better coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do that almost every time. It helps me slow down and switch off from my phone, so I can enjoy small details like changing crops or new buildings along the route. For example, on my last trip I watched the countryside turn into a busy town, which made the journey feel much more relaxed.

Gợi ý: You answered directly and naturally, but there are a few language issues and vague phrases ("line is nice", "capture my feeling"). Improve by correcting vocabulary, removing filler, and adding a concise specific example and a linking word to explain frequency or reason.

Ví dụ: Sometimes I do, especially when the view is striking or unusual. For instance, I took photos of a dramatic sunset from the motorway last month because the colours were unforgettable, although I don't photograph scenery on every trip.

Gợi ý: Your preference is clear, but there are grammatical errors and an unclear word choice ("coming"). Improve by correcting grammar (verb agreement, word choice), using a linking phrase to expand, and giving a concrete reason or short example. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because they feel calm and peaceful. When I stand among tall pines I feel both small and comforted by nature, for example during a recent hike where the silence helped me relax completely.

× Well actually I do this almost every time.

✓ Well, actually I do this almost every time.

Missing comma after introductory adverb 'Well' is punctuation rather than tense, but sentence is grammatically correct in present simple for habitual action. Add comma to improve flow. Suggestion: Put a comma after introductory words like 'Well' or 'Actually'.

× I think it can help me slow down and switch off from my phone.

✓ I think it can help me slow down and switch off my phone.

The phrase 'switch off from my phone' is incorrect; 'switch off' commonly takes a direct object 'my phone' or is used alone meaning 'relax'. Here the intended meaning is turning off the phone or switching off to relax. Suggestion: Use 'switch off my phone' to indicate turning the phone off, or 'switch off' alone to mean relax.

× I like watching how scenery changes along the way.

✓ I like watching how the scenery changes along the way.

Countable/uncountable noun 'scenery' is an uncountable noun that usually requires a determiner 'the' when referring to specific scenery. Omit or add 'the' depending on meaning. Suggestion: Use 'the scenery' to refer to the specific view outside the window.

× I think it can make the journey feel less rushed.

✓ I think it makes the journey feel less rushed.

Mixing 'I think' with 'can make' is not ungrammatical, but with habitual statements 'makes' expresses general truth more naturally. Suggestion: Use simple present 'makes' to state a general effect.

× Oh wow, this is a really specific questions.

✓ Oh wow, this is a really specific question.

The noun 'question' is singular, but the sentence uses plural 'questions'. This is a singular/plural mismatch. Suggestion: Use singular 'question' to agree with the determiner 'a'.

× Sometimes I do, especially if the line is nice or the views feel special.

✓ Sometimes I do, especially if the light is nice or the views feel special.

The word 'line' seems to be a typo; context suggests 'light' (sunlight) or possibly 'landscape'. Correcting to 'light' fits common usage. Suggestion: Use 'light' or 'landscape' depending on intended meaning.

× I think it can capture my feeling, but I'm not doing it very often.

✓ I think it can capture my feelings, but I don't do it very often.

'Capture my feeling' is odd: use plural 'feelings' or 'how I feel'. Also 'I'm not doing it very often' (present continuous) suggests a temporary action; habit is better expressed with simple present 'I don't do it very often.' Suggestion: Use 'capture my feelings' and 'I don't do it very often' for habitual actions.

× Well, I prefer mountains.

✓ Well, I prefer the mountains.

When comparing categories like 'mountains' vs 'the sea', English often uses the definite article with the noun as a general category: 'the mountains' and 'the sea'. Suggestion: Use 'the mountains' to match 'the sea'.

× I think they have a coming and tranquil vibe and when you watch it, it not only make me feel small but also kind of embraced by nature.

✓ I think they have a calming and tranquil vibe, and when you watch them, they not only make me feel small but also kind of embraced by nature.

Multiple errors: 'coming' is incorrect and should be 'calming' (wrong word choice). 'When you watch it' uses singular pronoun for plural 'they'—should be 'watch them'. 'It not only make me' has subject-verb agreement errors: use 'they' with 'make' and correct word order for 'not only ... but also'. Suggestion: Use 'calming', ensure pronouns agree in number, and use correct verb agreement and structure.

× It is really comfortable.

✓ They are really comfortable.

Pronoun mismatch: the speaker refers to 'mountains' (plural), so the pronoun should be plural 'they' and verb 'are'. 'It is' incorrectly treats 'mountains' as singular. Suggestion: Use plural agreement: 'They are really comfortable' or refer to 'the atmosphere is really comfortable' if singular is intended.