Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be careful with grammar, pronunciation and redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct subject-verb agreement (“it gives”), and avoid repeating ideas. Add one concise supporting detail with a linking word. Also limit to 3–4 sentences and use a slightly wider range of vocabulary (e.g., “soothes” or “refreshes”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when travelling because I enjoy watching changing landscapes. For example, I often sketch or photograph interesting views, so the journey feels relaxing and refreshing. This helps me unwind after a busy day.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and fluency: avoid filler words (uh), correct word choice (“car window” not “core window”), and use a clear tense. Give one specific reason and an example. Keep sentences concise and coherent with linking words like “because” or “so”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos through the car window because I like capturing beautiful scenes on my phone. For instance, I usually photograph colourful sunsets or interesting architecture, which helps me remember the trip and relax.

Gợi ý: Make your preference clearer and improve sentence structure and vocabulary. Avoid short, disjointed fragments and complete your sentences. Use linking words to contrast reasons (e.g., “because… and also… whereas”). Provide a brief example of an activity you enjoy at the sea.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I love the way the sunset reflects on the water and creates vivid colours. I also enjoy strolling along the shore and taking photographs, whereas mountain hikes tire me out, so I rarely choose them.

× Overall, it give me relaxation and calmness in journey.

✓ Overall, it gives me relaxation and calmness during the journey.

Subject-verb agreement requires third-person singular verb 'gives' to match singular subject 'it'. Also, use the preposition 'during' with 'the journey' and include the definite article 'the' to make the phrase natural.

× I'll finally take pictures of the scenery through core window because I love to capture beautiful things in my phone, which makes me relax and uh, I admire beautiful things overall, uh, I.

✓ I usually take pictures of the scenery through the car window because I love to capture beautiful things on my phone, which relaxes me, and I admire beautiful things overall.

Replace future 'I'll finally take' with present habitual 'I usually take' to fit the general preference context. 'core' is a typo for 'car'. Use the definite article 'the' before 'car window'. Use 'on my phone' for storing photos. Use third-person singular 'relaxes' to agree with 'which' referring to the whole clause; alternatively state 'which relaxes me'. Remove the trailing fragmented pronoun and filler words to form a complete sentence.

× I prefer sea because I love the reflection of sunset and the sea.

✓ I prefer the sea because I love the reflection of the sunset on the water.

Use the definite article 'the' with 'sea' and 'sunset' when referring to specific general concepts. Also clarify 'reflection of the sunset on the water' for natural phrasing.

× It is a colourful vibrance.

✓ It is a colorful scene full of vibrancy.

'Vibrance' is a noun and 'colourful' should describe a noun; use 'colorful scene' or 'full of vibrancy' for grammatical and idiomatic expression. Also American vs British spelling: 'colorful' (US) or 'colourful' (UK).

× Well, I hate to climb the mountain which will make me more tired overall.

✓ Well, I hate climbing mountains because it makes me more tired overall.

Use the gerund 'climbing' after 'hate' for general preferences. Use plural 'mountains' or 'the mountain' consistently; 'climbing mountains' is more general. Use 'it makes' for present habitual consequence.

× I click the photos and keep it as my.

✓ I take the photos and keep them as my memories.

Use 'take the photos' rather than 'click the photos' for natural English. Match plural 'photos' with plural pronoun 'them'. Complete the noun phrase 'my memories' to indicate purpose.